| Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: October 20, 2002 00:33 CDT|
Style of Writing: 5 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
This was a pretty good story and I wish the author had written it to completion instead of it dying off where it did.
The only downside was the use of illegal characters which caused all of the thoughts to be deleted from the readable text, thus making the story harder to read. If it hadn't have been for that problem I'd have rated this story even higher than I did.