Title: Nice
Reviewed By: reesespbcup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like your story and I like the way you write, but watch your typing, because there are quite a number of typoes and mixed tenses. Just keep that in check and maybe even look over your work before submitting it, and you're on your way to an awesome story. Nice work so far. -Reese
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