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| "YYH DS: A Perfect Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always did wonder how Hiei (with the character he is prtrayed to have) met up with Gouki and this sounds like a wonderful idea how! I like how you write. Keep going!
| Title: Hoohah
Reviewed By: MysticSonicTheHedgehog On: September 24, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, it's a good idea to have a deleted scenes story of YYH. I would've enjoyed it much more if you had used the dubbed names of the items like the Forlorn Hope, the Orb of Baast, and the Shadow Sword, but that's just me being a dubbie and all. Anyways, keep up the good work and I'll be reading part 2, 3, and 4...when I get the chance to do so. Remember, shounen-ai is very VERY bad. Smack me if you have to, I'm just stating a fact.
| Reviewed By: Tikia Thundaren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Just as a note, I'm not very good at reviews, so I don't leave them often. I always feel as if I've come off the wrong way. But, I feel that your fics deserve them, so, here's your review! Thank you so much for your review! And about reading your fics, I just did today! I liked them quite a lot; I've actually thought about this type (the missing scenes), and I've read several fics that use a similar theory. I like that all of them are done in different ways with different theories, and I like the veiws you've portrayed. That's the first time I've seen Gouki used as a source of information. In everything else I've read, he's been the person they hired to take the blame for the crime. Your writing style is very nice; it flows well. It kind of reminds me of the older YYH fics. It seems that the style and quality of work has been going down in a lot of the fandoms. Your fic, however, was quite excellent, so no worries. I'm sorry that it hasn't gotten any more reviews, it deserves them. Anyway, sorry about the long note for your review of my fic. I have a tendancy to rant... just like I'm doing now ^-^ But be assured, you'll have yet another long, detailed note from me in the next chapter! I hope to see more from you in the near future! Tikia Thundaren
| Reviewed By: Yamistar On: September 18, 2004 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I've always wanted to see someone write in those scenes that I had always wanted. But this one was kinda...easy to see. But I know of some...interesting scenes that I could "let slip" if you like. Hehehe. DOWN WITH FUNIMATION! I know I personally hate it. Booo! Ja! ~Ys
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