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"YYH DS 2: Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 17, 2006 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting take! I read oneonce where Hiei was being controlled by the Ghostslayer. That one was rather strange but I like your idea of Kurama getting under his skin bringing up Yukina. I like it
 Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2004 12:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh yah ! that was sooo kewl! Are u go nna continue it!!!? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! I KNOW IT SAYS ONE-SHOT (i think) BUT PLEASE CONTINUE! I WOULD BE FOREVER GRATEFUL! PLEASE, GIVE A SICK GIRL SOME HOPE! :-.-:
 Reviewed By: Tikia Thundaren [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello again! I think I liked this one best out of the current three. I don't understand why this one doesn't have a review. I like how you portrayed Kurama's character, how you described his state of depression at the time. Your characterization is excellent; I always appreciate it when people aren't OOC. The way you had Hiei's personality was very good, too, especially when you were writing about him unable to cope with the reality of his situation. Overall, I really like this one! Good job! Oh, and I forgot to put this in the last review, but the first version I ever saw were the American dubs, too. I don't see why people hate Funimation like it's the plaugue; I actually though they did a pretty good job, all things considered. But, anyway, great job! I hope to see more soon! Tikia Thundaren

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