| "Death and rebirth, can be a real pain in the ass" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
funny, *sniff* but offencive.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...i like it...alot...update soon...um i just have to pick myself up off the floor-Wesley!hahahaha! how many's butts have Hiei kicked for people making fun of him. and awsomeness on making hiei 5'8 and not a shorty.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
*cocks head* Gonna update?
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Title: LMAO XD
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was funny I can't wait to see what happens..
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
*laughing out loud at Hiei's name* WESLEY?!? XD Omg... okay that was fun. ^^ Good name choices- at least they weren't totally revolting like the Tagalog version... >_< *cough*VINCENTANDEUGENE*cough* Ahem. Luke is actually a nice name for Yusuke- hmmm... *ponders* Ponder! Newts! Drunk! (This is nothing you need to worry about, young one. Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if you were older than me... squeegee wizards!)
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 09:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting choices for their names....cough....buh thatss unimportant...i guess this stry is go0d...it can deff go places...huryy n update!-fox
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 03:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story, when wil there be an update to it, i'd love to see how Keiko will react to Yusuke being an american.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
*puppy dog eyes* Update? Pweez? *blinks cutely*
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Reviewed By: I_forget_my_name89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, okay okay...we've had that comin!^_^ *grin* Pleeze update! FUNNI!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ Sounds fun. I'll be checking back on this. Are their names going to be different? Heh heh, American names. ^^
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