| "Hiei snuggling with you in bed" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Amy15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 09:46 CDT
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You know, I think this is my fanfic...I am gonna post a new one, anyway, thanks for the comments! Cya around, PEOPLE!! Bwahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: sango_demon_exterminator [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 14:37 CDT
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Well its true and at least I flamed while I was logged in plus It's my opinion on what I think. ~SDE
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Title: ^^ Cute!
Reviewed By: Tori the Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Dont even listen to those two. Beating back idiots with sticks is something I do best! ^^ This is a reallly cute fic! Dont pay attention if they think Hiei is OOC, this is YOUR story, and you can make him however the heck you want! Your grammar is a heck of a lot better than some of the others I've seen out there, too! Never let life get you down, and don't listen to flames!! :D Here's a famous quote: (Actually, it's by me ^^;) 'Flames aren't to be listened to, they are to be used for roasting marshiemallows! ^^' You go! Keep it up! ~*Tori the Hanyou*~ P.S: If you're a Kurama fan, I have a ficcie you might like. It's a CYOA of Kurama/Reader. I think you'll enjoy it, lots of other people have. Peace, Love and Spirit Fingers!
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Reviewed By: sango_demon_exterminator [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 18:31 CDT
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I do have to agree with Clairice-sarah Hiei is waaaaaayyyyyyyy out of character and it's really choppy. Plus the character sounds like a love sick school girl and a prep !Blech! Sorry but Clairice-sarah is also right about ten year olds being able to write better.. MUCH better i suggest you proof read before you post. Just keep practising and once you got the hang of it then you should post your fics on mm.org ~SDE
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Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:46 CDT
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the part where it said, "Aw. Do you ever stop naggin?" that reminded me of Fairly Odd Parents...tee hee...update!
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Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 01:42 CDT
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this is cool! whoa......awwwwwww Hiei's so cute when he's OOC.....but update please!
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh........................... HUNN. FICS ARE NOT FUN WHEN THEY ARE OUT OF CHARACTER! *ahem* first off that.... isn't a songfic. Second... detail woman! DETAIL! How do you know Hiei, why would he want to sleep with you, I have to say this is pretty pathetic. My ten year old sister has written better romances. Next time, I suggest you remember the details and meanings of the fanfictions. Read around and get an idea about what you're trying to write. ::..LoR..::
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