| "The Worthless Child" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 18:41 CST
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Chapter 9: Wow, that was really good, except for this one thing that really bothered me. Why aren't there any quotations? I can't tell what's dialogue and what's not sometimes... so confusing...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 18:34 CST
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Chapter 6: YOU'VE got it bad? I'm a girl and I have to write all this stupidly lecherous stuff from Miroku's point of view! It makes me feel so utterly stupid...
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Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this be major awesome....please update soon....this fic is major awesome and i need more to read
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Title: >^_^< !
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei(not logged on) On: January 25, 2005 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Godx-sama! What a pleasure to finally see an update. I shall be hoping for more soon, as I believe all your other faithful readers will. I love this ficcy, hoping to see your stuff soon.-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: me the person On: January 16, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story please update soon k?
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Title: hihi
Reviewed By: Akiraton [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 17:13 CST
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hey!!! AKIRATON HERE!!! anywayz....i just wan u to no....that im linkin park's fan....and very lazy to rite reviews...now.......I WILL TRY MUH BEST TO REMEMBER TO REVIEW
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 27, 2004 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if it's a real word, but it's commonly said as "teepee" for those little indian tents, I think it's same for this.-Kitsu
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Dietl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following your story since september and it's pretty awesome, and teepee is spelt like so, please continue to write, by the way, i think you did a great job making hojo appear as the innocent flower but truly a serpent underneath, i always hated hojo, well awesomes story please continue!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(the lazy, not signed in one) On: November 19, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you!/Rin:Stupid cliffhangers...
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Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GReaT! im back! i liked it... i really liked it. please hurry with the next chapter.. i dont really have enough time on the computer.. so next time i will write a long review.. GREAT FANFIC! Ja-Ne! InuyashaxBabiexGirl forever!
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Title: Long Review Just to Warn You!
Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well here goes your long review... sorry i didnt get the chance to read it before... i was kinda grounded off of the computer... and i got stuck working so i didnt get enough time to go on... plus i am so busy with school... and catching up with all the work i missed... dam school... well i just wanted to you to know that you are doing a great job... thank god koga lost.. he is such a jerk in this fanfic.. lol... i dont like him much.. that worker girl... who the heck is she supose to be in this story? is she going to get with inuyasha??????? she better not.. before i am going to kick your little butt or i will not read your fanfics anymore.....LMAO.... naw just playing... i will still read them... but you said this was a INUYASHA AND KAGOME FANFIC!! i better be! omg... i am really pissed off how they ended inuyasha... i didnt really get it... i just cant wait until they come up with the next season.... i am so going to died if they dont hurry... and i am so going to kick you if you dont hurry up with the next chapter it you dont hurry.... there you go... there is the long review... hehehe... and i hope you liked the good feedback. it took me forever.. well not really forever... well good luck with the next chapters. just to let you know you are doing a great job with this girly stuff (good luck with that in the future)... LMAO... well i go to read the next chapter.. so later! i will try to make my other review long enought... LOL.. Ja-Ne !~*~! InuyashaxBabiexGirl !~*~!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 14:42 CDT
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not very good w/ words but you r doin rly good specailly for a guy writting this fanfic^_^ anyway hope you update asap ~Melissa~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 18:05 CDT
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Great chapters!^^ can't wait to see what happends next, hope you update asap. ~Melissa~
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Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:32 CDT
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well here i am again.. i would have read both of the fics before but i was too busy with school.. well you are doing great with the story so far... please hurry with the next chapter.. i am really liking it.. okay we all know you are a guy here... lol.. i am starting to believe it.. hehehehe... okay i cant write a lonf review today but i will next time.. lol.. please hurry with the next chapter... ;) good luck!
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Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.. that was very very funnie... god why the hell did he take her diary? god.. hehehehehe but it was very funnie... wait kagome has a boyfriend? Hojo!? damn... why hasnt he been around kagome then?? damn. that means i have to wait until you are done with then next chapter... come one.. please hurrie with then next chapter... i am sying to read it!!!! please... hold on... is inuyasha and kagome going to be together? or not?? oh wait this is a inuyasha/kagome fic.... nevermind... that means she is going to break uo with Hojo???? omg... lol oh well that will be great... well keep up with thw great work! and hurry up with the next chapter.. and i still cant believe a guy i writing this fanfic... i only though guys were into fighting fanfics.... THAT MEANS THEY HAVE A FEMININE SIDE TOO!!! lol... well.. love your story and please hurrie!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 14:12 CDT
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Good start! hope u update asap^_^ ~Melissa~
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Title: Here, have a review.
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much on words so here. Great story. Keep it up. Very impressed by the speed your writing this fic.
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankz for clearing it out with me... god it was soo confused... well i never thought that a guys could write these kind of stories.. sad and a little bite of romance.. god.. that kind blew my mind.. i guess some guys have a feminine side to.. hehehehehe... well please get going on the next chapter... i can't wait to read the next one... Ja-Ne InuyashaxBabiexGirl
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: InuYashaxBabiexGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is soo cute! i never knew i guy would write these kind of stories. its soo cool.. lmao. well the story line is great but i didnt really understand the beginning until like later.. it was all over the place. i dont even know how old they are. are they like in high school or something... well keep on going. write the next chapter. i am bored and i want to read the next chapter please. Ja-ne! InuyashaxBabiexGirl
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAwww don tlike it when authors make inuyasha want to kill himself this is the second fanfic ive read with that. But anyway, I really like the fanfic but please dont describe guys. lol just to take the pressure off. It was funny how you describe him though. lol. Well Update soon ok bye^_^ PLease and Thank you
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you not finish the last chapter it stops st it was 2. wel if its supose to be like that um the chapter was short. bu ti hope you update .^_^ please and Thank you
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Reviewed By: Wind Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 22:02 CDT
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Toooo Short. Write more! .... Please :)
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