| "Heat Wave" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 22:33 CDT
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Hey. This is a really good story and I hope you'll continue it. You just need to space out your story a bit to make it easier to follow and Marik/Malik's sister's name is Ishizu/Ishiizu. And you went from Ishuzu, Ishuza, to Isis in the chapter. In the Egypt arc, Isis is Ishizu's ancestor. Anyway, just some creative criticism. Not a flame. Otherwise it's really good and I hope you'll finish it soon. I loved the part where Joey/Jou and Tristan/Honda threw Yami at Ishizu. I loved the valley of the Kings comment. LOL. It was hilarious. So please, PLEASE continue. ^-^ Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 15:24 CDT
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wheeew, another great story of yours, can't wait till you update
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Title: Why is it ?
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is it that the Yami's are suppose to be used to the heat if they were from Egypt? Besides Yami was in a palace he probably had cold water and servants fanning him. Bakura being a tombrobber probably kept cool underground and Marik well he was underground too, and he's just pyschotic lol.( but in a cute sort of way lol). Anyway I like this story,please continue.
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Reviewed By: LittleBaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good set up before the actual plot happens or is presented/introduced is a good writing talent. I like how this is going and the chapter title was very nice too, i like it. plz update
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: LittleBaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love Malik/Anzu! i like where this is going, very nice so far, very nice. hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ this is still very cool and i'd luv a romance!!! malikxanzu sounds good too! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooo i think this is very good!!! plz dont delete and update soon!!!
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