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| "YYH DS3: Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 07:05 CDT
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Good idea. It will always be strange tot he fans of YYH why Hiei got the same conditions as Kurama and this is a good idea. Also it brings up how the spirit world found Yukina. Very interesting!!
| Reviewed By: Tikia Thundaren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 01:15 CDT
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Sorry about the copy review; this one from chapter two was supposed to be here. I don't know why it got put there. That aside, here's the review where it's supposed to be! Hello yet again! And another very nice new scene! Very well done, especially your Koenma! Most people just downright bash him, or he's portrayed as a childish idiot. While to some degree, he does act like a childish idiot, he's also at times much more mature than the main characters. I really wish that the anime hadn't used him and George (the blue ogre) as comic relief, it portrayed Koenma very badly. I always viewed him as you put it; kind hearted, with a desire to rule justly. He's just a bit young yet. Anyway, the chapter itself was very good, too! Kurama was again done excellenty, and the writing again very smooth and clear. That's one thing that I always worry with in my writing; I tend to over explain. My sister is always telling me, 'people have brains, make them use them.' Anyway, while I am going to leave you a note in my next chapter, I just wanted to say one thing now, since chapter four is going to take a bit. You mentioned hoping that I didn't make the story about OCs; I would like to asure you now, this story will NOT switch focus to them. I will go into more detail in the chapter four note, but I just wanted to say that now. So, no worries ^-^ Anyway, very nicely done! I hope to see more from you soon! Tikia Thundaren
| Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:09 CDT
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Not a series I am familiar with, but the style and flow of this made it a very good read. I am impressed at how well it gave me insite into the characters thoughts. Nice.~Fanilia
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