| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: rain-chan (ame-hime not logged in) On: September 29, 2004 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an evil cliffhanger to a very, very good chapter that was worth the wait...perhaps the wait for the next one could be a tad shorter?
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Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I have read many crossovers and yours is by far the best I have ever read. It is really wonderful, I love it soo much. I hope you update the next chapter really soon. Oh and I love your story because you have one of my all time fav charaters as Kagome's love intest. I love Hiei, he is just he coolst!! -Amy-
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 29, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Men . . . they get so distracted easily . . . then again . . . so do I . . .
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Title: more kag/hiei time please by Inu_chick24
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 13:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and love the kag/ hiei pairing . They are my favorite type of pairin beside kag/ sess and kag/yoko or kurama. Keep up the good work on your story. Please update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 25, 2004 18:39 EDT
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it's so good I don't have much to say... everyone already said everything! but a review to say how much I love it won't hurt ^^ I hope you'll update soon again!
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: September 25, 2004 01:02 EDT
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I thought hiei was telepathic, not telekinetic. just a thought. and your story ROCKS!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome story! I really like a Hiei/Kagome pairing. I find Kurama either dull or, like you and Deviation have written him, creepy. A couple of times I had to go tell my daughter (14 and she introduced me to fan fic) about the good bits (Hiei and the tampons and the pamphlets in the waiting room in the Rekai.) I do think you are making Kuwabara too thick but I like that, in order to have a non-canon pairing, you haven't make IY a total a-hole.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 24, 2004 19:29 EDT
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=D
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 24, 2004 18:04 EDT
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oh dear.... thatr can't be good....
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Reviewed By: rain-chan On: September 24, 2004 17:45 EDT
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No! He needs to take advantage of it in the next chapter!!! ..but if he does, then souta doesn't need to see it on kanna's mirror because that would probably break him down more than a little bit
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Reviewed By: legendarysilverfox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 16:33 EDT
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Please tell me if u r ever gonna have hiei on a sugar high. I know it's not normal for him, but it'd be funny as hell!! Later. Shadow
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Reviewed By: Gabby [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was waiting for you to update, and you did! I realy liked it and can't wait till the next update!....so....PLEASE update!!
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Title: Souta...
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Disgruntled_Hanyou On: September 23, 2004 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to all the levels of hell and heaven that if Naraku pulls a Michael Jackson on Souta, I'm going to freak. great fic by the way. *hands over the choco Kurama.* Here ya go, next chapter pwease!!! I'll give ya a choco sesshy if ya do...
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, damn that aff.net! Good thing for MM.org! hehe. Well well well, very interesting chapter. So much good action packed scene after scene. Loved it. Sorry for the shortness of this review but its waaaay past my bed time, hehehe. Once again, great work!!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 22:49 EDT
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And the plot thickens (dun dun dun)! Anyway, *squeal* I love this story. The updates have been fantastic, and it makes me happy to see them in my inbox. ^^; You've created a monster; ever since I begun reading about the YuuYuu peeps, I've been trying to find other crossover fics to read. I'm currently stuck in BellDayNight's fic _Freak Show_. As for Happy Meal Barbies... I cut off all the hair and strip 'em, and let the dog to chew on. Then I throw it away. Works for us. Until next time, ta! :)
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