| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuch-Ookami On: February 11, 2005 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update as soon as possible. It is getting so good! She has to tell Hiei abut the Sess deal soon. I just cant wait.
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Reviewed By: leysha On: January 10, 2005 12:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. please tell me you are going to finsh it. i hate it when other writers leave off just when the going gets really really good. i hope you update soon and i can't wait to see what happends btween hiei and kagome. i love that pairing. you are such a good writer. ever thought of writing a kag/sess one or maybe a kag/youko or even a yus/kag, those are so rare. well hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 22:55 EST
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This is a graet fic and please keep on writing. You are a graet writer cause usually other writers do not update as fast as you and you are not lazy. 2:Somnambulicious
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Reviewed By: Yuki1000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 00:06 EST
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update plweas I love your story i Cant believe it took you so long to updat over a month dont do it again * * -*
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 21:11 EST
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*grin* Hiya! This is a very nice story. I hate fanfictions where Hiei like, grabs Kagome and wisks her away to have sex. It was nice to see how they actually progressed in their feelings with each other. Also I liked that you added all the parts that authors usually skip so they can get to writing the good parts. No author's notes was another nice suprise. I was suprised at the way the story was still interesting after Kagome and Hiei got totally together. Usually it gets really boring with Kagome like, having a baby, and Hiei being the *gag* loving father and crap. So overall, please continue because you're a wonderful author! Hehe ^_^
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 17:18 EST
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I love this story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Modra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 00:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i'll start off by saying this is probably the best iy/yyh xover fics i've ever read. i won't rag on other fics but the way you've set this up is far more credible and realistic. i like your writing style. it's kind of... i hate to use the word 'simple' but less can definitely be more. there is enough description that we know what's going on, while leaving something to the imagination. anyway, enough praise... now for the criticism... *evil grin* i think you've done a good job keeping it ic. hiei, though more talkative, seems like himself. i can definitely see sango in the role of slave-driver :) but i do think kagome is kind of ooc... granted, she would mature a lot in a couple of years, particularly through her experiences but there's a few things i saw that seem a bit off. for one, she enjoys violence too much. though there is that triumph of winning in the anime, i don't think she would enjoy the act of killing in itself. (the drug experience is fine, but in other scenes) also, i think she could've retained more of her innocence. one of the things i like about her is, despite all she's been through, she still acts like a 'girl' much of the time, romantic, light-hearted, at times ditzy. she seems a bit too serious here. i dunno, maybe i just want see her cheerfulness annoy hiei a bit more :P also, i think she'd be more flustered by the boys' attentions, considering her inexperience. hmm.. i could say more (praise and otherwise) but i'm out of space. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tori~Chan On: December 13, 2004 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and another wonderfully written chapter:) i love this and the way it's going and i can't wait for another update so how well is she going to learn to use her powers? and is she really going to tell hiei what happened? lol i HAVE to know lol this is the first story that i'm actually hooked on lol keep em commin :)
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 04:13 EST
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another AWESOME chapter...that was GREAT but is she still gonna tell Hiei about what she promised Sessh??? and why oh why did you allow her to make such a promise I mean she could have Held Rin as a hostage until he did as she asked...LOL...yea RIGHT...I can just picture that...next thing you known you have a dead Kagome w/a dead Hiei right next to her...LOL...sorry umm, great chapter wonder what Kurama has in mind and if Hiei really should worry...YIKES...Oh and I love the idea of POSSESSIVE Hiei:D
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Title: Crazy ass fan-fic...
Reviewed By: DemonGoddessSlayer On: December 11, 2004 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, seriously, this fic has me hooked like Hooked on phonics. I'm up to chapter 9 now but I'll read the rest tomorrow morning. This fic is really good and keep on updating. I would love to see more. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: December 11, 2004 21:17 EST
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hmm... me too I have a bad feeling about this... I hope Kurama won't do anything stupid. Anyway... I really loved that chapter, but I had to read the previous chapter to really remember what happened before! Sooooo... it means... you must update sooner!!! ^^ Whatever. Please update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: December 11, 2004 19:16 EST
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hmmm, what is Kurama up to? She didn't tell him! She didn't say she had to serve Sessho! i thought she was gonna tell them that...
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (2 lazy 2 log in) On: December 11, 2004 19:14 EST
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I agree there are some parts that the characters were OOC. You make Hiei sigh to much. You also never picked up on my idea were Kagome sees Hiei's demon form. He looks soooo kuel like that 2 me. ^_^ If you are going 2 do that e-mail me and tell me so I dont have 2 keep writing for you 2 do that. Other than that loved your fic, and will be your #1 reader.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:42 EST
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I am definately wonderfuly delighted with you. But so many questions! What's up with Kagome's soul? What did Hiei pick up at the end of this chapter? How is Kagome going to get out of her deal with Sesshoumaru? And what is her "super secret plan" to get rid of Naraku? Well, the only way for me to find out is for you to keep writing, so please do so before i give myself an aneurism! Oh, by the way, your website has proved to be an invaluable resource for alternate iy/yyh pairings. Thanks!
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Title: RyokoImai
Reviewed By: RyokoImai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:47 EST
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Konnichiwa ^__^ How are you? I hope that you have been doing well. Well I'm just writing you because I would really like it if you would please update all of your wonderful fanfics. I am still waiting on the next chapter of "Paradox" as well as "Enemies with Privileges" so please, please update soon. I have been going mad trying to figure out what will happen to our favorite characters. I also wanted to know if you have written the fanfic starring Kurama and Kagome? If you have, I would love to know the title for it. Please, take care, and keep up the great work. Ciao Ryo
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