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"Something Less than Perfect: NEED ORIGINAL CHARACTERS!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Title: Sweet I'll try
Reviewed By: Nakiakasu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2004 17:04 CST
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Name: Momoko Ii Age: 15 Gender: Female Appearance: 5'5", pale, short super wavy dark blue hair, dark gray eyes Personality: A little quiet but when she opens her mouth it's usually an insult, sarcastic, rude, crude, out-going, cool, calm and collected, not a social butterfly but not an outkast either Likes: Fire, drawing, air, spiders, fighting, insulting stupid people, talking to smart people, fixing things, breaking stuff, blood, breakdancing, rain Dislikes: Cooking, cleaning, singing, girly girls, butterflies, meat (she's a vegetarian), candy or other sweets, sleeping, hugs Paired with: Hiei or Seto Kaiba Other stuff: Has no family. Lives on the streets with a rough gang of teenage boys. Has been accepted to many good colleges already, and claims to want to get married at age 16. Was raped when she was 9 and has kept it from everyone until she meets her crush. - Cool story, update soon! OR ELSE!!! Thanks, I reviewed yur other story too. ^^ Bye!
 Title: looks interesting! COOL!
Reviewed By: White Spirit Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2004 21:15 CDT
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ame: Aurora Age: 16 human years, about 300 in demon years.Female. Angel Demon. She is very gentle but with sarcastic and playful mouth and always willing to make friends.Appearance:Long flowing white hair past her knees. Long bangs cover a part of her face, sparkled crimson red.5'3" human clothes; blue jeans and a white tank top, sandels(or uniform if you prefer it). demon clothes; long flowing white gown, barefoot,long black cloak hiding her white wings for both forms. Pairing: Kurama!(tries not to let him know but always gets flustered and shy around him. Likes: Mind games(good at guessing) loves to dance(loves being center of attention). Dislikes: being a demon and hides it by wearing a black cloak(taking it off when alone) thinks being a demon makes her responsible for all the demons who have killed, believes she has the same blood stained hands. fighting(to the point death is eminant) I hope Aurora makes it, e-mail me at angelcatj@yahoo.com
 Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Name: Gin Ookami Age: 14 Sex: female Appearance: silver hair that reaches thighs, azure catlike eyes, 5' 3", olive pale skin, always has bandages wrapped around her torso and wears a black sleeveless low cut V shirt and black baggy pants and black combat boots. She can transform into a wolf and is silver with black tips on her ears and tail. Personality: She is very straight to the point and hates when people think they're better than her, she is very violent, and doesn't trust easily. But once you become friends then she will remain loyal and will sometimes become over-protective Likes: staring at the moon, fighting, chocolate, and writing Dislikes: preps, pink, people who judge, and people who abuse Pairing: Toboe (Wolf's Rain) Other cool stuff: she's Tsume's younger sister (though he doesn't know and she will tell him someday) and used to know Kiba whom treats her as a sister
 Reviewed By: Medjke [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2004 21:53 CDT
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This sounds like fun. Let's take a shot, shall we? Here, I'll even give you a teacher. Name: Nyoko Tsui Age: 27 Sex:Female Appearance: Is 5'7", brown skin tones and long black hair, two white stips in the back where she holds her hair in a ponie tail. She has two golden eyes, almost like a cat's. She is very muscular and athletic. She likes to wear traing clothes, but can be stuffed into a suit once in a while, just not one with a skirt. Personality:Surprisingly she is very patient. She tries to make her teaching methods fun and easy to learn, sometimes acting like a teenager herself. Doesn't teach class room lessons (ex. Takes class to amusement park for science lesson, rock climbing for gravity, etc). Is only in there for tests. She's usually outside for lessons. Life lessons are her favorite (i.e. quietly teaching students about relationships without their knowing). She is also always there for ALL students (PREPs, jocks, nerds, independents). Likes/Dislikes: Reading, riding her bike, cooking and her life lessons. Pairing: She claims to be married to her work and her independece, but the students wish to change that. NOW. Other cool stuff: She somehow munipulaates things to work for her or for her life lessons and seems to pop up whenever a student is having a problem (jumping out of air planes and landing infront of people). She also seems to be able to read minds...She also is a good person to be around if you want to get out of trouble.
 Reviewed By: FairyKittybell [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2004 19:14 CDT
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Hmm interesting! Here's my OC: Name: Rena Age: 15 Sex: Female Appearance: 5'8, very kawaii, has short brown hair, and light blue eyes. Personality: Cheerful and independent, very sweet and caring, has a thing for Kiba (Wolf's Rain)and has a bit of a short fuse for rude people Likes: Kiba, chocolate, swimming at the pool, listening to music, singing along to music, playing video games, humor, cats, and wolves Dislikes: PREPS! bullies, uptight prisses, and most of all, People who never say anything nice! Pairing: Kiba! n.n Other cool stuff: Is a strong fighter but sometimes chooses to stay back and heal people and she has a good sense of humor.
 Title: I think this sounds interesting
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2004 19:01 CDT
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Sounds interesting, here's my OC. Name: Kaori Age: 16 Gender: Female Apperance: 5'6, lightly tanned, looks very kawaii, has rich brown that is staight and alittle above shoulders. Has dark blue eyes and a blue star and moon tattoo on right hip. Personality:Carefree mostly but can be very kind and think deeply. Likes having fun, happy go lucky, sometimes spaces out and then doesn't know whats going on, (very cute when that happens) Takes a long time to get mad, when that happens you better watch out. Likes: Sweet snow! Chocolate, cookies, swimming/rain/water, soccer, listening to music, fighting, sleeping, singing(in japanese) and dancing, hanging out with friends, working w/ electronics, taking walks. Dislikes: Tea, preps, prissy girly girls, people who hurt others, people that make other peoples lives bad. Paired w/: Ryou!(childhood best friend) Other cool stuff: Often doesn't know answers to questions but is a very lucky guesser. Can think like a computer and also has a basic healing powers. Genetic experiment, and now is able to heal up to very near death.

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