| "The Moments Before Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: kayoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
i totally agree with the other two reviewers in a sense of how great this story actually is and how few people have left a mark. However, that is the usual trend here on mm.org. I loved the story and really wish that you continue it. I want to know if Naruto and Sasuke were together and why Sasuke's sleeping with women now. What broke them apart? Your fic was very thought provoking and I really do hope you continue it, even though it has been over a year. Thank you for writing this.
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Reviewed By: matsutake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, glorious angst ^__^ It was marvelous, from Naruto's introspection to Sasuke's disregard. It was simple, short and still pulled at the heartstrings. It's disappointing that it's your only fic, but maybe I can look forward to more? heh. Because of the untied strings at the end, it makes me want to write a fic based on it. I loved it. --matsutake
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't understand how people don't review things... most of the time they are one-shots that don't get reviewed... happens to me too... meh, I like this fic good hjob... I am hoping for a sequal or something... but... its been a while so anyways, good job and keep up the good work
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