| "A chibi adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: HAHAHA*cough,wheeze*
Reviewed By: kitsunesoul819 On: September 24, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH!!!This has to be the best chibi stoy i've ever read!please countinue with this story because I want to see miroku and sango chibified.I nearly died laughing when Naraku was a prissy,stupida$$,evil.....thing.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASECOUTINUE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 11:39 CDT
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Awwwwwww! I didn't know this was going to be the last chapter! o.o! As I was reading it I thought that you had pretty much perfected your writing style for this fanfic. Everything seemed natural and smooth. Definitely one of my favorite chapters. Great job on cuteness and jokes. o.o; Wow...can't believe it's been a year. Well, it is a good place to end it, but if you do think of anything to continue with, go for it! ^_^ Congratulations!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this was funny and creative. i really got a kick out of it. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: carman On: August 08, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it was really funny about the whole naraku thingy and it was so cute the way you wrote about inuyasha and kagome and what they did when they turned into babies, and anyways write more chappies!
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Reviewed By: Anjel-dono On: July 11, 2005 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
its so cute! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *am i ever signed in?* On: May 31, 2005 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! UPDATE SOOONNNN!!!
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 21:44 CDT
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Hi! Wow, it's been a while. o_o Hope you continue to write more. The bath part was well written. So cute! ^_^
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Reviewed By: rikku_kiani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
wheeeeeeeeeeeee you updated!!!!! ^^ i looove this fanfic--especially naraku... XD keep it coming!!!
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Title: So cute
Reviewed By: yuni On: April 29, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cute. Please hurry up and write more chapters.
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:29 CST
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um is sesshomaru being pissed a good thing or a bad thing? anywho good chappie! chow! i was gonna write more but it was soo long i forgot (the long part was good!!:))
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Reviewed By: TheKirbyKid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 23:16 CST
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That was such a good chapter! You've been improving quite a bit. I loved the humor in this one - this line especially made me laugh: "After a while, Inuyasha became very impatient. He even stuck his foot out in the open, and Kagome picked it up and looked under it instead." XD And you did a really good job of fitting in a lot in one chapter without making it seemed rushed. It was a great, smooth read. Always worth the wait. ^^;
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged on) On: November 27, 2004 23:23 CST
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yaay!! update! good job on the story!
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Title: : )
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 26, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKEY FANFIC ME LIKEY FANFIC ME LIKEY-get some control of yourself, you're a big girl... Anyway, I love this story, too damn funny, update VERY SOON! VEEERRRRYYYY SSSOOOOOONNN!!!-Kitsu ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Archer On: November 26, 2004 12:24 CST
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i'ts still reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally cute!!! ^_^ i still luv it!! keep writin!!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 11:09 CST
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Sorry that I forgot about the last chappie! >< Sorry!!! Anyways, this'll be fun! Naraku has gone MAD!!!!! Poor Kagura... She has to put up with him. It's still hilarious. Can't wait for the next update!
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