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| "Bluest Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: November 18, 2004 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:hey red here and to answer ur questions i would love it if yugi treated me like a princess and yes i would comfort him over his saddness with tea yes i would absolutely love it if he did all the things he did for ankh to me and yes id love to make out with the little tenshi hehe he is soooooooo sweet and though i wish i could listen to the songs that he sang so i know what they sound like im sure he sounded beautiful hehe for no one is as passionate about things as he is i know that much hehe well keep up the great work DJR hehe and update all the following stories this one the pageant one and the one were DMG gives everything up to make yugi happy hehe im liking this stories more and more so pls u must update soon hehe u know its just a little thing of a suggestion but maybe next time u should have ankh sing To love You More by Celine Dion to show that she would and will forever love yugi while tea walks away from him hehe itd be soo cute well gtg now JA NE ^___^
| Title: NANI!
Reviewed By: Ryn Whittaker On: September 14, 2004 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVERYBODY knows me?! (BLUSHES) Arigatou DJ-kun.
| Title: KAWAII!
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar (too lazy to login) On: September 14, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1.) How would you feel if Yugi treated you like a princess? K.C & Mai: Like a princess! 2.) Would you comfort Yugi, if he was reminded of his past relationship with Téa? K.C & Mai(Under their breaths):Bitch slap her.(Coughs) We mean, hug and kiss him^_^ 3.) How would you feel if he sang that song to you? What would you do to him? K.C & Mai: *Melts* 4.) Finally, would you make out with Yugi like Anhk was doing now? K.C: *Beet red from blushing* Mai: DUH! ^_~
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Wonderful conclusion. Anhk is one lucky girl... 1.) Like the luckiest girl in the world. No way would I let him go! 2.) Yes, definitely. 3.) Umm..err...wow. See answer #1. And do? I really don't know... 4.)*blush* Erm...probably. You are a really awesome writer.
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: September 12, 2004 18:29 CDT
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I already have wrote a trio of songs with Yugi in them. I think you know which ones I mean. Anyways, I really liked this song as well as the whole trio of songs. You are definitly the best romance writer i have ever seen, and coming from me, you can take that as a compliment.
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:29 CDT
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A bit of sap is good. ^_^ Wonderful chapter, I really didn't know you were planning to make this more than a one shot. Ok, questions: 1. Erm...well...wow. I dunno... I'd be pretty shocked. 2. Yes, period. He's not the kind to stand on the side lines. 3. I don't really know... 'Friends in Low Places,' the song that Ssaffr01 suggested sounds like one you'd use. In the fire or outside? I don't think I'd be brave enought to stand within the flames. V. good Dj, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: September 11, 2004 13:05 CDT
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I'm really not sure when it comes to that. I'm not sure that I'm within the fire, or outside the flames feeling the heat against my skin. However, if you were going to update today, maybe you should of had Yugi sing Where were you (when the world stopped turning) by Alan Jackson in respect of the special day, but that's just me. Anyways, you may be a sappy person, but it makes your romance stories all the better. If I hadn't read Yugi Spirt Blacksmith all those years ago, then I don't think that I would have made any other stories, especially Link in Endiness or Aelita's Hero or any of my other stories. However, I don't think that i have ever thanked you for being my motivation, so thank you.
| Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 12:11 CDT
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Do I really need to rate this? EXCELLENT as always. Next song huh? Let me think....(thinking)....How's about 'Stand Still' by Billy Ray Cyrus? Or 'We Shall Be Free' by Garth Brooks? I even know of a perfect song scene between Yug and Tea, 'Friends in low places' also by Grath Brooks. About Tea always wanting him to be Yami and she falls for Yami when they finally split.
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 22:32 CDT
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Kawaii! Meep, Yugi singing! Wonderful idea, and I liked the song suprisingly, given that I'm not a big country fan. A song? Well, I got three. Either 'Rapunzel' by Dave Matthews band, 'Smooth' by Santana, or 'This Love' by Maroon Five. ^-^ Yet another wonderful songfic.
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: September 09, 2004 20:51 CDT
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That's my second favorite genre of music, right after the classic rock of yesterday. However, I never heard that song, but i liked it just the same. However, my favorite country singer is actually Montegomery Gentry, but to each their own I always say. This was a brilliant work of art, something that should be put into publishing.
| Reviewed By: Isis-san On: September 09, 2004 19:09 CDT
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O.O OMG....SO KAWAII!! *glomps Yugi, then notices the threatening Yugi fangirls in both the real world and the Shadow Realm* O.O I'll just let go of you now Yugi. *lets go* Anyways, this was a cute little songficcy. I liked it! He's so cute, but Yami's mine first. (I'm really annoying you, ne?) Okay, I'm only going to talk about Yugi in these reviews ra damn it! So....it was a great idea, it was nicely done and I wuv country. I have some CD's but they're all women sorry Yugi. ^-^;;
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