| "And then, there was TA" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Comment/Review
Reviewed By: Davis Rocks On: July 11, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!See, it's nice to see in some way how things were before TK(or should I say TA o_O)moved to Odaiba.Very Davis friendly, wich I have spent 2 days looking for and only found 2 fanfics.Go figure, eh?:P
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Reviewed By: ftthjytuj On: May 28, 2003 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Grear fic just make it end daikari with more ch |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 13:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic, now you just need to write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Davisfan On: August 03, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent grammar and puncuation. Iv'e read several stories like this ,but you gave this a new twist. (aka 'Kari getting Davis in trouble')
I honestly think you brought out both of their characters really well. Kari with the 'innocent but still mischevouis' look and Davis as 'Friendly but still funny and slightly ignorant'. I really hope you continue this story soon. |
Reviewed By: The never ending Cheese On: April 07, 2002 11:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wheres the next part???? Well I want to read it as this chapter was good. |
Reviewed By: Cele Li/Takaishi/Son/Hida/you know my bishounen loves, sistah On: August 31, 2001 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, I love this ficsie of yers. Your so talented. And I dunno how you make Tai/Dai so believable… I just go through HELL getting into their heads. Next time your online, pester me to type up your Taiora - it's doooooone! Yayness! As soon as I type up my Sorato songfic, expect it in my Fiction Addiction Blog - shakkou.scribble.nu. On the fic, um, go see the review I left @ ff.n. =P Gooooood-byyyyyyyye, Friend Temp! -c |
