| "Those Who Hunt...Eva?" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Due to bannination...
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 17:40 CDT
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Message to all who want to read the next chapter: Due to Alpha-Zulu's still unexplained banning from MediaMiner, with his permission I've posted the next chapter at the following place: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/qualitylemonarchive/ Join up and go to: Files > Evangelion > Those Who Hunt...Eva? I'll be posting the final chapter once he writes it. Enjoy.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:02 CDT
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I just finished reading chapter 38 of this story, this guy hasnt disappointed me yet. Its still weird though to read a lemon that actually has an interesting plot. now we just need to wait and see what has happens now that the story is winding down. good story bud, may it be the first of many to come.
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Reviewed By: Logistikill [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, they were right. This is...different. I'm gonna email him and see what's taking so long for the next chap. Judging by his post rate, he should have had another one ready by now!
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 15:27 CDT
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i hope you havent abandoned us bud. i am really enjoying your story, and would like to see it finished.
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Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:14 CDT
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Very nice. FOIBLE ADMITTANCE ALERT! I've never actually seen more than a couple full episodes of NGE plus the AMVs and Hentai film, but what I have seen does compare nicely with what you've written. BTW, I swear I saw this years ago on FF.net, before the big lemon axing...
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Title: 34/35
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 22:23 CDT
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Good chapter. Only one more chance to add Aki to the harem. Don't forget the threesome. :)
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Reviewed By: rootathell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fickenkomikern...The sentence sounds like 'I am surrounded by fucking comedians' or so, although I'm not entirely sure (/Me is nativ German-speaker) I like ths story VERY much and am abusing my right index-finger on the F5 Button in anticipation of the next chapter
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Title: 33/34
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Unformatted comments follow: Poor Dr. Akagi...she really needs some good Shinji-style lovin'. Maya too! You really are working through all the Eva females - and I love you for it. In a very a platonic way. Still waiting for Misato to give in. I'm convinced of it's inevitability. What's "Fickenkomikern"? Could get it to translate. I'm sure it's not something pleasant. :) Soi-disant, wow, it's been a while since I've seen that used! Such erudition. "Misato had been as charming as a sun burnt rattle snake lately" Heh, that really got the image across, I imagined her as being leathery, with hellish pits for eyes. Poor Misa-chan. Oooh, the threesome card. My day just got better. Overall, excellent chapter.
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Title: 32/33
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 13:08 CDT
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SPOILERS................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ............................Hikari as the 6th child? Where's her guitar and leather jacket? Not to mention the katana. Excellent chapter. This one had a nice mix of events, revelations and emotions. You're also getting the "feel" of Eva exactly right with the use of terminology. There's not too much (a common error) or too little (also common). I really wish these reviews allowed fucking paragraph breaks. I look forward to the welcome-home sex next chapter, if there isn't a cataclysmic result from Shinji's scheduled Gendo-office visit that is.
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Title: Up to 30/31
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:25 CDT
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I sense the endgame approaching. Nice image there with Touji, for some reason I could imagine him lying there very clearly. I like Pen Pen\'s dialogue, that was a new combination of words to me. :) Hopefully the Shin-man will get out before things go to shit, or we'll all be left lemonless for the next few days.
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Title: Chapter 26/27
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Whew, finally caught up, you've written at least a novel's worth. Good stuff thus far, though Rit-chan was starting to come off like a Mary Sue for a while there, especially during the trip. You're doing a great job, I really appreciate the reading material. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 17:24 CDT
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i dont know if you have this prewritten, or if you are actually killing 2 chaps a day. whichever it is it doesnt matter. you are doing one hell of a job, and more authors should learn from your example. this is a well detailed telling of an au, which is actually being continued. instead of being dropped and forgotten after 3 chapters. i hope you finish it. catch you on the B side.
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Reviewed By: askthedonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, dude you fukin rock. Normal when i come across an idea for a fic it takes me like 2 weeks to write a good chapter for the fic. But you not only come up with a kickass idea, but your pumping out 2 chapters a day as a minimum, A MINIMUM OF 2 FUKIN DAYS! So it is with this knowledge that i say, fuke dude you rock. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: clauswitz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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really like the story so far so please keep up the good work though i have to admit i will kill you have the pilots lose their challenge in support of that i have a few suggestions that might help (though it seems like you have already written this out since your posting it so fast) a)lots and lots of pain grenades (though you seem to have already covered that) b) airstrikes (hey misato can prolly get her hands on a helo at the very least) c) lots of traps (though again that seems to have been mentioned) d) a network of cameras and motion sensors hooked up to pdas so that the pilot team will always know where the other team is e) and of course bugging the other team is a good idea as well, if they thought of the other team bugging them they should think of bugging the other team oh and shinji needs to have more sex with all the girls;p
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Reviewed By: portercu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 03:41 CDT
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very cool story, cant wait to see more of it. catch you next update.
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