| "Through The Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: DUDE!!!!
Reviewed By: Nekoyoukaiaila [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice one. A little OOC, but cute nonetheless ^_^. Liked how Inu got his payback too.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awe, it was sweet, I really liked it.
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Title: I MEANT SCENE!
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
scene* SCENE* I MEANT SCENE! see, even reviewers like me make mistakes, which is why you must always double check! ja ne.
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Title: "a" shouldn't be capitalized!
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
there were many grammatical errors, and spelling was a big issue for me, i found it extrmely hard to read. i found inuyasha's crying screen kinda funny, and very, VERY out of character. but funny. next time, try spell check, it'll work wonders.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay. this is a wonderful story. i loved the whole thing, except for the grammer and spelling issues. this story would have been a lot more enjoyable for me had you just used the spell and grammer check on microsoft. other than that, it was a good story. ja!
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Reviewed By: Colhan3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was soooo sweet and cute! Evil people who hate other for just being diffrent! Its good that Inuyasha now has people around him who like him the way he is. Dirty mouth, foul temper, stubbern additued, puppy ears and all. That and a girl who loves him ^-^
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Title: so sweet
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was very sweet. It showed off the innocence that can sometimes be lost in the show. Very good job, the only thing that you could work on would be spelling errors.
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