| "An Otaku Citrus Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryu Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 11:34 CDT
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wow i have to say, i have been looking for a good FMP fanfic and was dissappointed to find none satisfactory, but reading yours made me laugh so hard. you did an excellent job of keeping both characters in character, which proved quite humorous. keep up the amazing job, and maybe you will come out with more equally good fics that i know many would love to read.
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Reviewed By: claudya_87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...good job...it's really funny...
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Reviewed By: Guardikai On: March 13, 2005 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you kept them both very much in character. You even managed to slip in a few of the continuing gags that are in full metal panic and full metal panic fumoffu. I was quite impressed at that. Also... your use of Sagara was perfect. Really, i mean that. he is difficult to write for and think of what wording he'd use, it must have taken some time to get it right. I can see you put some effort into doing that correctly. Oh and it was refreshing that you stuck to what you ssid and didn't go into a lemon... seriously, there are way too many lemons out there. Thanks for letting Kana and Sousuke keep their dignity somewhat. Great stuff there. Finding FMP fanfiction is difficult, finding one that keeps the characters like how they should be, is enjoyable to read and is funny at times... well that is just awesome ^_^ Keep it up and ganbatte!
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so hilarious! They were perfectly in character, and I can totally see Sousuke doing that. Great work!!!!!!
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Title: *falls over laughing*
Reviewed By: Jodi On: November 30, 2004 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a lovely job capturing the idiosyncracies of both Kaname and Sousuke and incorperating it into an amusing little lime fic. Thanks for the light break from my boring work day!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 29, 2004 18:49 CST
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Excellent story. If I may say, sometimes the best lemons are the ones that don't describe the sex... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfectly in character and funny as hell!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Man! I watch the show and I think Sousuke puts up with a lot of abuse but if I had been Kaname in this instance we would never have made it to the post coital cuddle. Very amusing.
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Reviewed By: IchigoAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was great! I think both Kaname's and Souske's personalities are shown perfectly. It's rare to find a FMP story and even rarer to find one as good as this! I look foward to later stories!
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