| "Ryu No Jigoku (Dragon's Hell )" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: RG again.
Reviewed By: Chapter 4 Review On: October 17, 2004 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon!
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Title: Chapter 3 Review
Reviewed By: It's me again, RG On: October 17, 2004 05:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! RG PS: what does Kagura look like?
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Title: Chapter 2 Review
Reviewed By: RG On: October 17, 2004 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good chapter. I especially enjoyed the sceen in which Rin refered to Sesshoumaru as "Fluffy." It was so adorable! RG PS: As for your question in chapter one, there is one "wa" and six "has."
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Reviewed By: Ran_Gus30 (I didn't log in.) On: October 17, 2004 03:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! It has excellent characterization and plot... spelling too. Please email me soon at the crpud.net address. RG
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