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"Yu Yu Pool Party" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ]
 Title: ShirachiChan
Reviewed By: ShirachiChan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 14, 2005 21:09 CDT
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I seriously hope it's not to late to join!The fanfic was hilarious.Anyways heres my info. Ne,I suck at explaining things but here goes... Name:Shirachi Akimoto,Age:17,Height:6'0,Hair:Black&waist length with red tips,Eyes:Ice-blue but, when she angry her eyes turn red,Gender:Female,Outfit:A black tee with a white dragon on the back,black baggy pants with zippers&chains,a golden necklace with a dragon on it with two sapphire gems on each of its sides[Matching bracelet and ring also],black gloves,black tennis shoes with white laces,and a black bandana with a picture of a white dragon on it[In my hair],Atttude:Short-Tempered,aggressive,keeps to herself,doesn't really like getting to know people,get's bored easily,doesn't really listen to people,prefers to be alone then with other people,a fighter[When nessecery],and a loner[But,doesn't care],Dislikes:Annoying,loud-mouthed,and stupid people and the ones who are too nice[Makes me want to strangle them to death],Race:Asian[Part chinese and japanese]Hobbies:Being alone,just sitting around,reading[Kinda],taking on challenges,perfecting her fighting skills,teasing people,and I guess thats all?Plus, I SERIOUSLY HATE PINK! I love the colors black[DUH!],white,and silver
 Title: um...ello thea (there watever)
Reviewed By: funnibunni [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i don't know if i wrote that thing rite up there, anyway hi! it twas very enjoyable, i have trouble with that kind of stuff, that's why i have my friend help me!! okay anyway i saw you were looking for a person or something so i decided that i'd give it a go....what do i say?...hm....well first off, i don't want to be paired off cause then i can't have much fun with everyone, um, i think i need a personality, ok, OWWW!!!*slaps mesiqito* sry, neway okay how about just the fun loving type of person, not to bubbly, not to depressing, but just right! like poriage! hehe, next! i really don't care what i wear, it kinda depends on where we are swiming always two piece. a skirt bottom and tank top. okay, i think tha about covers it all, anyway. So i shall be looking forward to a responce or something *tryin to make friends* oh!!! a name duh!! i'm so stupid, it's Nyomi. there we go! NOW, it's all complete kool!!! i'm tired, must....go...lay...down...sleepysleepysleepy...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
 Title: Can I join you??
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2005 17:28 CST
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Hope it's not too late to join you. So, here's my info. Name:Jacquelyn Age:17 Race:shadow demon Hair:waist length black hair with golden brown highlights Eyes:blue-green Paired with:TSUME!!! Personality:is hyperactive sometimes when it comes to sugar,generous,kind-hearted and nice. She can get mad when irritated. Clothing:green tube top with tight white capri pants and white phat farm shoes. Hope it's not too late for me to get in this story. E-mail me at Jacfrog@aol.com if I made it in. Ja ne.
 Reviewed By: staroutlaw91 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 22, 2004 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
You already know bout me.
 Title: I wanna be in!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: RiverStyx18 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2004 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. Name,/b>:Lena or Lenny Family:Deceased Gender:Female Hair:Black with pure white ends Eyes:Green Age:18 Normal Wear:Camo guys' cargos, black racer tank that says Walls hurt, especially when you run into them or Over medicated for your safety, or some goofy quote you can find. Carries a black leather jacket and wears a ski camo hat. Party Wear:Black mini, black knee high boots, and a black halter, with lots of silver jewlery. PJs:Gray sports bra, and some, pretty much black hot pants Powers:Is telepatic, telekinetic, and can morph into anything she wants. Accesories:Has a fang necklace, but won't tell anyone where she got it unl;ess she wants to(from Satan)Also has tattoos:Black rose right at her waist, her boyfriend's name on her lower back. Pairing:Kiba, or if not possible, InuYasha. has a pet tiger taht is still a cub at the beginning named Nami. Ummm...Can't think of anything else, but if you need more email me at marryinelmo@yahoo.com Ja Nae, Len.
 Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I apolojize if its to long.
 Title: SORRY!!!!!!!PT5 PLZ pick me!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:38 CDT
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You can use her any time you want just E-male me b4 hand ok?k.don't have any names for the attacks.One turns the opposing peoples to stone,annother poisons those whos main point/goal is to do somthing Evil to the world and heals others as well as rejuvinates there everything,and the other is to catch the eye of the greedy and kill/send-them-to-prison/or somthing of that sort.(plz dont be mad could not think of any thing)~^* sorry its so long.
 Title: I hope having such a long thingy mo dohickey doesent ruin my chances but PT4
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Pets:(all color changing)A Female Fox name Zuni,Female wolf Name Nami,a Female Tiger cub named Jahandra,A Male Hawk named Roronoa(i could not think of another one so NO laughing!) tiger and hawk are b-day presents from friends.The Hawk can control winds.The Fox can control Plants.The Wolf can control Earth.And The Tiger can use telepathy and control the enemies.~^* Anything else you think that I should know:Is 1/4 kitsune 1/4 wolf 1/4 shadow 1/4 light demons.When in any form besides an animal she is thought to be a goddess.pets can also go invisible talk through telepathy and speak to the spirits.Foxy has the same eyes when is in an animal form.good fighter.weapons are like the blades Rikku has in X2.only one is black w/the name life written in white and other is White with the name death written in black.A passive attitude doesn't talk mutch except when on a sugar high.When ticked off RRUUUUUUUUUUUUN.and says 'hn' (for lack of a better sound)or sighs allot....THAT ALLOT!!!!!!!!!! Has a human form.just doesn't have her.Ears:one fox ear colored kinda like the ying yang sigh and one wolf ear done the same.thats when in her 'true' form.you know when Sesshy is all talking not killing and miss.......never mind like Koga only Yoko and Inuyasha ears.When in DOGGIE form bigger then Sheesy 'cause of her wolf blood but only when mad has 11 tails when in animal form~^* On side BAD.Evil can not always be fought by good.THEN I come in.also kinda cocky but has good reason to be.~^* You can
 Title: Pt3 long,ne?
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:35 CDT
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Abilities if they have any (i.e. seeing the future, being an empathy, etc…):can change form like beast boy but also color,can go invisible nothing i mean nothing can find her unless they bump into her.and can speak with the souls of 'inanimate(sp?) objects' and clothes can cast light and darkness and some illusions and can go through walls and things.can not be detained for long if at all,can hide in light and darkness~^* Accessories: (do you have any jewelry, ect.)A Blue charm bracelet that has a animal head like her pets her name Foxy her friends and brother's' name engraved that tell her by glowing if they are in need of assistance.Friends have as well~^* Who the want to be paired with:I would prefer if it were Toya(sp?),Jin,or Koga.For another fic you can use it for some one else except Kura/or Inu Bakas Inu IS cute but is blind to what Kikyo and Kagome both want.Ifeel for them ya know!I don't love Kikyo BUT I don't hate her nether~^* Friends and/or Family:BFs both females Lupe R. a 1/2 Hawk demon 1/2 wind demon Alicia A. 3/4 Tiger demon 1/4 lion demon have the same pets as Foxy,Half brother who lives with his dad they Dog Demon .All other family massacred by Jeff Brendon's Dad.Brendon is the younger brother of Foxy only a few years old.He is 1/4 light 1/4darkness and 1/2 dog demon father killed by evil persons Pets:(all color changing)A Female Fox name Zuni,Female wolf Name Nami,a Female Tiger cub named Jahandra,A Male Hawk named Roronoa(i could not think of anothe
 Title: PT2
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:34 CDT
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Normal wear:Low-rise blue genes (SP?)light blue shirt that says in blood red letters'i have left to find if i come back before i return please keep me here' or 'people who think they know everything annoy those of us that do' or a black shirt that has a girl looking at the reader while sitting with white letters above her saying 'theres no hiding from me' and in silver letters the word 'death'under her or a red shirt with a dragon on it outlined in red or a sliver shirt with the words 'good girls are bad girls (who never get caught)'and dark blue zipped-half way sweater that says I AM F.I.N.E as in Freaked out, Insecure, Neurotic, and Emotional=fine as well as insane but hey we all cant be perfect' on the backin light blue,different sized letters and the pants have cute little fox,dog and wolf prints all over it.or a blue-almost black trance coat and jacket are the same thing it changes forms to whatever wanted~^* Party wear:Ultra blue minny skirt and a tenny tiny blue shirt(no she is no slutt or any thing)and a long Dark blue Jacket that isn't really a jacket that goes to her knees.Jacket and trench coat are the same thing it changes forms to whatever wanted~^* Pjs:when on own usually a black bra and dark blue camouflage printed flannel pants or blue undies and silk shirt or when w/others a BBBIIIGGG dark blue or gray NBC shirt that goes down to knees and the pants.~^*
 Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:32 CDT
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Normal wear:Low-rise blue genes (SP?)light blue shirt that says in blood red letters'i have left to find if i come back before i return please keep me here' or 'people who think they know everything annoy those of us that do' or a black shirt that has a girl looking at the reader while sitting with white letters above her saying 'theres no hiding from me' and in silver letters the word 'death'under her or a red shirt with a dragon on it outlined in red or a sliver shirt with the words 'good girls are bad girls (who never get caught)'and dark blue zipped-half way sweater that says I AM F.I.N.E as in Freaked out, Insecure, Neurotic, and Emotional=fine as well as insane but hey we all cant be perfect' on the backin light blue,different sized letters and the pants have cute little fox,dog and wolf prints all over it.or a blue-almost black trance coat and jacket are the same thing it changes forms to whatever wanted~^* Party wear:Ultra blue minny skirt and a tenny tiny blue shirt(no she is no slutt or any thing)and a long Dark blue Jacket that isn't really a jacket that goes to her knees.Jacket and trench coat are the same thing it changes forms to whatever wanted~^* Pjs:when on own usually a black bra and dark blue camouflage printed flannel pants or blue undies and silk shirt or when w/others a BBBIIIGGG dark blue or gray NBC shirt that goes down to knees and the pants.~^*
 Title: PT1
Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 17:29 CDT
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~^*CANT SPELL FOR BEANS!!!!!~^*Name (They need a last name also):Real:Cheyanne Nel Nick name(s)Foxy,K.O.B.,and AZ goes by nick name(s) not real one except w/family or legal stuffs~^* Age:273 in demon years late teens early twentys in human~^* Gender:Female~^* Hair:Beach blond w/light pink and blue highlights w/right hair framing face dark purple and left dark blue, ends 'bout three in look like it was dipped in blood~^* Eye:usually mostly blue w/silver,gold,forest green flecks or silver w/blue,gold flecks or all other combos except green as dominating color depending on nothing~^* Normal wear:Low-rise blue genes (SP?)light blue shirt that says in blood red letters'i have left to find if i come back before i return please keep me here' or 'people who think they know everything annoy those of us that do' or a black shirt that has a girl looking at the reader while sitting with white letters above her saying 'theres no hiding from me' and in silver letters the word 'death'under her or a red shirt with a dragon on it outlined in red or a sliver shirt with the words 'good girls are bad girls (who never get caught)'and dark blue zipped-half way sweater that says I AM F.I.N.E as in Freaked out, Insecure, Neurotic, and Emotional=fine as well as insane but hey we all cant be perfect' on the backin light blue,
 Title: May I Please Join?
Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 00:45 CDT
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Name: Kikyou Anyakinashi Race: Fire/Shadow/Vampire (she could go out in the sun) Age: same as Hiei n Kurama Eye color:dark blue Hair-Black, long hair,that stops an inch above her butt Clothing-black tanktop w/ Linkin Park in blood red letters,black leather pants w/ chains attached,and black converse shoes. Personality:sweet,kind,friendly,but she can still hit ppl over the head if they do something stupid,hates to see her friends sad,left out,likes to hang out with her friends,can b sad at times b/c of her past Paired: Hiei! (or Kurama) if ya need more information, e-mailz me at ShadowMistress666@hotmail.com OR Instant Message me at tigergirlrockz
 Title: i wanna join!
Reviewed By: NiteMistris09X [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2004 15:12 CDT
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name- naomi eyes- gold hair- black with purple streaks skin- pale attitude- short tempered, prankster, easily can become hyper shirt- purple, losse and shows belly button, and says viva la bam in black, outlines in white pants- black baggy, purple stitching shoes- black combat boots other- a black and purple fitted jackass hat and fingerless gloves pairing- INUYASHA! tell me if get in and e-mail me at Oopsie9010-@comcast.net for more info! thanx and i hope i get picked!
 Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O.o *whacks hiei with a rubber chicken* don't kill natsume-chan! i want to read her story! *pulls out a huge bag of candy* natsume-chan i could help with your spelling if you want^_^ just email medesiree509@yahoo.com

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