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| "YYH DS 4: A Conversation over Dinner" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 07:10 CDT
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I actually read this part before the others!! But I didn't reveiw then so I knew the whole back ground now I feel I can!! I really like this one! That Hiei seemed to stop and think about his new team is interesting just like Kurama nd Kuwabara sleeping on eitherside of him, almost like watching him, as well as Yusuke being alook out. Yusuke and Kuwabara were funny whenthey were compalaining about food and a place to sleep, sometimes they really act immature! But that gets reversed rahter quickly sometimes. I really like how you write, it's amazing! Your ideas a rather original, amking htem very interestin to read! I love thses stories!!!! ~Chaos Blade
| Title: I SO LOVED THIS ONE
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOVED THIS ONE! IT'S SOOOOOOO *whats the word I'm looking for...one i rarely use...I got it* CUTE! DO U NO WHAT EPISODE U WERE WRITING THIS DELETED SCENE FOR CUZ I HAVE LIKE ONE DVD T.T AND BUYING MORE I WANT TO GET THE DARK TOURNMENT ONES FIRST THOUGH SO YAH. HOPE FOR AN ANSWER PEACE OUT
| Reviewed By: Tikia Thundaren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Yay, you posted another one! I'm really enjoying these, you're doing an excellent job! They keep getting better as you go, too. In answer to your question, I didn't think Hiei was OOC. Even in the anime, as you mentioned, he had rather poetic moments. His moment in this fic was very well done; so, no worries, he was fine ^-^ Actually, all of your characters were in character. You're very good at handling multiple character interaction and keeping them true to the originals. Heh, Kurama's jealous ;) And I'm glad you're going to pace the romance; it does make a story much better to spread it out. And I completely agree about Sandy Youko's stuff; I read everything up until the Kitsune gathering thing. After that, I got bored; I was reading the stories for Kurama and Hiei, not her OCs, no matter how original or cool they were. Funimation did change a lot, too; I've watched all of the episodes up through disk 25, and I've seen most all dubbed and in Japanese. What I noticed was that the American's squeezed in a lot of jokes. But overall, I didn't think they did a bad job. Anyway, I'm running out of words (I wish they didn't limit us) so I'll stop ranting. Overall, very well done! Don't worry about your characterization, you're doing great with them. Oh, and I'm sorry your beta hasn't responded; I think it turned out fine regardless, though. I hope to see the next one soon! Tikia Thundaren
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