| "Wake-Up Call" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: MMMM... i like
Reviewed By: Lovin' What I Read On: May 06, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep everything! GREAT! oh but i agreed, get into detail about the last night. i mean the mirror and the couch! details! or just write another good one.
|
Reviewed By: anamelikemin On: March 07, 2005 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn half-demon, i wish i could wake up like that one morning....with a hot chick waking me up with...erm....her mouth...great fic, but now i wish i was inuyasha....
|
Reviewed By: ktakn On: October 13, 2004 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
very awesome i loved the way of your writing. you could definetly continue this
|
Title: GO MONSTERKITTIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kick some major ass! This is pretty good! The only bad thing is that the only reason I heard of this story was because of a little so and so by the handle of lilqtkagome. I know that you know about her. I left my own scathing review for her viewing pleasure. ShadowCat3013@aol.com(or ChromiumBlue3013@gmail.com)
|
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Crazy_Green [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great i loved what inu said about kag already having her breakfast. keep up the good work nice job!
|
Reviewed By: Cho-cho On: September 29, 2004 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY! You are one crazy lemon writer!! Juss to tell you there's this girl who plagarized on your fic. It was published in adultfanfiction.net juss to let you know. You've been one of the 3 good author that has been plagarized by her and i wanted to let you know that. Love your lemon scene goshh makes me feel all giddy and happyy! ^___________^
|
Reviewed By: Del_kaidin (NLI) On: September 28, 2004 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Monsterkitty, Just wanted to let you know that a little twerp by the handle of lilqtKagome has posted this story as hers http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=36772 Del_kaidin.
|
Title: off to a good start...
Reviewed By: respected and master pervert, reader, and writer On: September 27, 2004 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, the only thing i did not like is the first person aspect. I would perfer a third person perspective but another thing you could do is say what inuyasha was thinking while Kagome was...'playing' with him. One other thing you could do is go into more detail of the prevoius night's 'activites'. Any how this is probaly one of the best pwp i have read and i have read a LOT of them. I also see that this is your first story, you are off to a good start, just don't be like some other people who wait a friggin' year and a half to write another story. - A Educated Pervert
|
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whew...pretty hot in here eh?
|
Title: wow
Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was awesome....yeah...awesome.
|
