| "Pyrokenesis" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot! another chapter! keep up the good work, l8rs!
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:11 CST
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*Looks around to see if Vegeta is nearby*......*See that he isn't* Vegeta and Bulma are soooo CUTE together! Time to wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 18, 2005 11:18 CST
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awww that was so sweet... vegeta and bulma are so cute... this story is awesome... can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 13:08 CST
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It wasn't boring at all. The early chapters are always used for setting up the rest of the story. Some people write longer chapters than others. But once the story takes off, I've noticed the chapters tend to get longer. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 19:07 CST
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I say take offer, Bulma... Aw...I can't think of anything more to say.*Cries*
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 16:07 CST
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I updated my story, and made grammer revisions enjoy... :P
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Reviewed By: Veglma, Guardian of Vegeta-sei's Royal Family On: September 20, 2004 21:50 CDT
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Hm... Interesting story. Florida? Why did Vegeta choose Florida for? Xiahou Fumi: Maybe he forgot that hurricanes love hiting Florida. Komachi Ayako: The people, who are chase them, maybe don't think they will go there.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 20, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like, the plot seems thick, cant wait to here more
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: September 20, 2004 19:10 CDT
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first and foremost I did not post twice but I was happy being the first reviewer
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: September 20, 2004 19:04 CDT
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we know laziness prevails and I do not sign in... muhahahah... GREAT START... FLORIDA?!? why would they want to come to the state of the hurricane season that never ends.... ahhhhhh... ok some of us are a little bitter bc our family lives in the panhandle... where the kitty is... and then I go to school in the peninsula so basically we are screwed no matter where the damn thing hits... ok enough ranting... bc there are two more coming and I'm not looking forward to it particularly... so where in florida are they going I'm excited to know... but that was AWESOME... this seems so interesting... and I can't wait to see a little bg aswell... and one day some of us will get on it and will do this little thing called update our own stories... woohooo.... ok fantastico... I'm right here with you for this one as well... of course why would I abandon you now... I haven't yet... hee hee except that week in aug. but what can I say I was in Cozemel... well Ja'ne, shitsuree shimasu... ohyeah I'm taking japanese... hee hee... good stuff
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: September 20, 2004 19:04 CDT
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we know laziness prevails and I do not sign in... muhahahah... GREAT START... FLORIDA?!? why would they want to come to the state of the hurricane season that never ends.... ahhhhhh... ok some of us are a little bitter bc our family lives in the panhandle... where the kitty is... and then I go to school in the peninsula so basically we are screwed no matter where the damn thing hits... ok enough ranting... bc there are two more coming and I'm not looking forward to it particularly... so where in florida are they going I'm excited to know... but that was AWESOME... this seems so interesting... and I can't wait to see a little bg aswell... and one day some of us will get on it and will do this little thing called update our own stories... woohooo.... ok fantastico... I'm right here with you for this one as well... of course why would I abandon you now... I haven't yet... hee hee except that week in aug. but what can I say I was in Cozemel... well Ja'ne, shitsuree shimasu... ohyeah I'm taking japanese... hee hee... good stuff
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