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| "Azumano Private School" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: kelblossom1128 On: April 29, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So........ when do you plan on UPDATING!! Authors have to do this to veiwers
| Title: Ooc
Reviewed By: sango the demon neko On: November 14, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok forget the 1st one i sent except for the bio and the apperence(sp)so but i'm a really good martial arts and a good beyblader !! beyblade:red and black bitbeast:lykoi is a half neko and half wolf but my clothes are the same but on the shirt there's a small black flower over the top of my breast!and the gym shoes !but i really like kai . so i want to be attracted to kai.so attitude strong ,cocky ,not afraid to speak my mind ,and i will even talk about kai in his face , a few couple of friends and somtimes sugar high, and really doesn't like pink or school uniforms!!!my family never knew them and really is an orphan so and sometimes i love to annoy people nad my hair is past my butt it's to the back of my knees!and was trying to sneak out class while running into ray .but still my bitbeast also can talk to me but anyway she has the fur of a cat and has the eyes of husky !!so her attacks are from the darkness but she is still a cheerful and love chaos but she's still supportive!!but she's very crazy!!!and my sleeping clothes are a a black and outlined red a kimono and sometimes a black chinese dress with the the sides outlined red and same the color pants !! and a black belt in karate !!and open a good can of whoop ass!!!and would a skirt when i don't have anything else to wear but i will still have shorts or pants under them.but my affection for kai will be later on because at first i thought he was a jerk!!but later on i start to like him . and my bitbeast fur pure snowy whi | Title: Ooc
Reviewed By: sango the demon neko On: November 14, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok forget the 1st one i sent except for the bio and the apperence(sp)so but i'm a really good martial arts and a good beyblader !! beyblade:red and black bitbeast:lykoi is a half neko and half wolf but my clothes are the same but on the shirt there's a small black flower over the top of my breast!and the gym shoes !but i really like kai . so i want to be attracted to kai.so attitude strong ,cocky ,not afraid to speak my mind ,and i will even talk about kai in his face , a few couple of friends and somtimes sugar high, and really doesn't like pink or school uniforms!!!my family never knew them and really is an orphan so and sometimes i love to annoy people nad my hair is past my butt it's to the back of my knees!and was trying to sneak out class while running into ray .but still my bitbeast also can talk to me but anyway she has the fur of a cat and has the eyes of husky !!so her attacks are from the darkness but she is still a cheerful and love chaos but she's still supportive!!but she's very crazy!!!and my sleeping clothes are a a black and outlined red a kimono and sometimes a black chinese dress with the the sides outlined red and same the color pants !! and a black belt in karate !!and open a good can of whoop ass!!!and would a skirt when i don't have anything else to wear but i will still have shorts or pants under them.but my affection for kai will be later on because at first i thought he was a jerk!!but later on i start to like him . and my bitbeast fur pure snowy whi | Title: ooc
Reviewed By: sango the demon neko On: October 09, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't feel like typing out a bio , but here's a short one: name : sango houshi age: 16 bio: hate being irrated ,good going , loves fighting and beyblading lite skinned and long raven black hair with blue streaks in the front beyblade dark red and black cool name:lykoi type : half fox , half darkness angel and a wolf with black and blue and sliver fur and she can talk to me and she's always hyper and love to cause CHAOS!!! my arraction toward kai and ray/rei . and i want to be the first or third they meet in school and i was fighting and had to dragged to detention and there just staring and sweatdropping and i'm a very, very, very , very ,very good martial artists and i really don't like wearing school clothes(if u have them) and i'm wearing a chinese V- neck red and black shirt and the same color pants and wearing airforce 2's and there red and black stripes on the bottom of my shoes and there white all over and i really ,really, really don't like PINK !!! and just seeing it make me sickk!!! and i was fighting in the middle of the hallway with the person who was dragging me to dention !!! and they are still staring at how fast i can kick and punch !!!!!!!!! sooooo please do this for me !!!!!!!please!!!!!?????onegai((pppllleassseee))) ??????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!love sango the demon neko!!!!!!!!!!^-^^-^ ^^^---^^^^ please do this for me becuse i loooooooooooveeeeee to rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeead yo stor | Title: PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Reviewed By: EvilCareBears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 13:09 CDT
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Me-Update please VIMH(voice in my head):Update or she'll cry. Me-No I won't. WIMH-Yes you will. Me-No I will not. VIHM-Yes. You. WILL! Me and VIHM get in big argument.
| Title: COOL!!!
Reviewed By: Kuro-mirai (notlogedin) On: October 01, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet great chapter up-date as soon as poss kk!!! Did Rei ran in to me I just Have ta no up date up date uuuppppp-ddddaaaatttteeee!!!!!! PLLLLLLLLZZZZ with a cherry on top ^_^
| Reviewed By: Emona DragonDancer (2 lazy 2 login) On: September 30, 2004 18:23 CDT
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Those hints are VERY useful...! *sarcasm* But oh well. Great Chappy!
| Reviewed By: Ice Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:46 CDT
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This was great, must get next chappie up soon! plz!
| Title: aw crap
Reviewed By: kady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darn oh well can you inform me if you us my OC in another fic cause I'd like to read it. by the way well done on this story.
| Title: PPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: EvilCareBears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update, update, update, UPDATE!!!!! If you do I'll give you a pixie sick ^-^.
| Title: sorry
Reviewed By: kady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:44 CDT
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the e-mail isn't working please e-mail me if I goofed on OC form I sent in
| Title: I Hate my computer
Reviewed By: Kuro-mirai (notlogedin) On: September 26, 2004 17:07 CDT
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(Something you would like to see happen-) I wont to play Tag!!!!!! ^_^;;;;;; heheheheh........ (Tags you and runs right into a brick wall) @_@ ok got to go know bye bye
| Title: stupid computer!!!!...sorry
Reviewed By: Kuro-mirai (notlogedin) On: September 26, 2004 17:05 CDT
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(Bio/History-) Her mother and father died from an unknown disease when she was three her older brother was 10, she went to an orphanage with her bro until he was old enough to get a job and hold his own her the adapted Kuromirai, her bro inherited a fortune after there anti who lived in America died, now there rich and he has enough to send her to a privet school. (Personality-) She likes doing things her own way, she very unpredictable, she can be really cold one sec. then in another sec. really nice, you don't now what she'll do next, she doesn't take orders very well and hates it when people underestimate her in anything espaicaly beyblading! (Genealogy- )shes Chinese but lives in America (Bit-Beast Name & Type-) Suisei (it means Mercury) (Beyblade Colors/Style-) Attack/Endurance she likes surprise attacks, Blue an Silver (Bit-Beast Element-) Ice/snow Fox with dark blue fur with light blue paws and snout, it has silver armor on its chest, head, lags, back etc. and a blue Cristal that glows when mad! (Attacks-)Cold crush-Its a finishing move the freezes the opponent for a short period of time. Crossfirehurricane- her bit beast whips up a hurricane of Ice flames that will burn the freeze quickly a very affective attack, Ice wall- a huge Ice wall forms around her bitbeast to keep it from getting hurt. (Pairing-)Ray or Max (Quotes-)Learning how to except the past is harder the excepting the future, With a new day brings new pain. (Extra Stuff-) Is a red belt in Tia kwan do | Title: hi ^ ^
Reviewed By: Kuro-mirai (notlogedin) On: September 26, 2004 17:03 CDT
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Sorry for my spelling I tryed my best and thats all that people ask from me right.....RIGHT oh well here is my Oc (Your Penname-) Misunderstood_Soul (Your E-mail-) Soulless_Life@yahoo.com (OC Name-) Kuromirai Yoma (it means black future) (Nickname-) Kuro (Age-) 14 (Birth Date-) September 24 (thats my real b-day ^_^) (Gender-)female (Hair Color-) black with silver tips (Hair Style-)up in a high pony tail about to her knees (Eye Color-) Silver (Clothing:) (Normal-)a black shirt with silver writing says "Happiness is just like candy it comes with a price" and dark blue jeans. (Formal-)A sliver shirt with red trimmings and nice black paints. (Sleeping Attire-)black shirt with red,purple,silver flames on it with matching pants. (School-) she refuses to wear a skirt so she where's the boys uniform (Accessories-) Beyblade, book on "how to defeat the undefeatable" (sp?), and lab top (Favorite Music/Band-) Liken park, puddle of mud, new found glory, etc (Hobbies-) Blading, listening to music improving her blading technique (Fears-) she only has one and thats to lose her older brother (Dreams/Goals-) to win a world champion to show that girls are just as good as boys (Likes-) the night, cold things like ice winter etc, shinny things, cookies and beyblading (Dislikes-) day time her saying "with a new day brings new pain", dull things, purple cookies, and PINK ITS EVIL I TELL YOU EVIL!!!!!!!! (ok I'm done ^^;) (Family-) her older brother (Bio/History-) Her mother and father died from an | Title: OC
Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 19:12 CDT
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OC Name- Reda Aiyoma Age-..umm..a year younger then Kai Birth Date- February 1st Gender- Female Hair Color- Black Hair Style- hair down to waist and two big bangs that go down to her chin (maybe abit lower) Eye Color- Dark blue Clothing:White long sleeved blouse,(sleeves rolled up to the elbows) black school skirt with white thigh-high socks and black high heels(school shoes) School- They are in a private school. The uniforms are at the bottom of the form. Accessories- Small black back-pack. Video camra. Samerai sword. Favorite Music/Band- Any kind as long as it's good Hobbies- Video typing beyblade battles Fears- To be defeated... Dreams/Goals- Unknown (She's kinda mysterious) Likes- sweet things, beyblades, and cooking. Dislikes- Tala (but she actually likes him) Bio/History- Actually she had a very happy past.. Personality-She's always positive except when around Tala. Genealogy- Japanese Bit-Beast Name&Type-Osiris-Dragon Beyblade Colors/Style-RedandBlack.Attack type. Bit-Beast Element- Fire.Wind. Attacks- [Death strike] A huge blast of fire that comes out of it's second mouth(if you've seen yugioh then you'll know how it works)[DarkWind] Osiris beats it wings and huge gusts of wind are sent at the opponent and many energy blades are sent at them too.[Enferno] A huge tornado of fire is form around the oppenents beasts and destroys everything in it's path. Pairing- Tala Quotes- You've destroyed the beginning but brought forth the end...
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