| "Closure" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Yankeefan8 On: January 24, 2005 00:18 CST
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Nice fic. Your ending was good even though I didn't want the story to end that way but I guess it will have to do. Plz write a sequel!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: (Dark Angel 666) On: January 16, 2005 00:08 CST
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WRITE A SEQUIL! WRITE A SEQUIL! *Puppy dog eyes* PWease?????????????????????????????????????
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Title: VERY good story. 10 out of 5 stars
Reviewed By: Rudy246 ( can't log in cause my comp is a peice of crap) On: January 15, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Ash/Misty fanfic i have ever read. and i have read hundreds. You are a true artist my friend. And I applaude you. I give this fanfic 10 out of 5 stars. I dont beleive I will ever see a better fanfic than this. I think the only thing that could possibly make it better, were pictures. lol. Or a movie! LOL. U should make this into a movie. lol. sell it to Warner Bros and tell them to make it into a movie. But on a serious note, you are a true writer. I look forward to reading each and every one of your fanfics in the future. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: habilain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 15:22 CST
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I've just managed to make time to read the rest of the fic since my last review - I'm glad I did. Unlike so many other Romance fics I've read, this one has managed to not become horribly cliche in it's later chapters. Only the actual ending left to go. It's still just a cute, and the characters are acting in character, so it's a very good fic in my books.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I just read your fanfic from the first chapter till this one, and I have to say, it is very good. Ya kinda left us on a little bit of a cliffhanger, what with having Ash read that last part of her jounal entry and all. Can't wait to read the next chapter. *adds this to my favorites list*
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Reviewed By: gladdecease [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 15:43 CST
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Not bad...glad there's some intervention coming up, as those two need it. I won't bite off your head for taking this a bit slowly...I don't mind, really. Just go at your own pace, and post some more soon, please! Later!
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Title: In Response...
Reviewed By: Chibi-Suiko (nli) On: November 12, 2004 08:19 CST
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Okay, I just wanted to clear up the implacations you may have gotten from the author's notes in the last chapter (or two) about my not seeing any Pokemon eppies since Jhoto... I wrote this fic over the summer (like, JULY) so I DID happen to see the Togepi Paradise eppies... They just aired after I wrote this... And I never revised the A/N's so... There ya go. --Chibi--
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Title: Too Lazy To Sign in!
Reviewed By: (Dark Angel 666) On: November 10, 2004 21:29 CST
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Yet another good chapter! YAY!!! Misty has appeared in a couple of the new episodes though.
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Reviewed By: gladdecease [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 16:47 CST
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Wah! That was sad! And you haven't watched an ep since GCYL? But that means you missed the Togepi eps. Too bad; they were good ones. But back on topic: I enjoyed the tension and fighting; it was realistic, IMO, and I enjoy reading sucj realistic fights. I hope they make up [or someone intervenes] before things get seriously bad between Ash and Misty. Update soon! Later!
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Reviewed By: habilain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 14:45 CDT
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Very cute; I like it. You've gotta update this soon. And as for any other characters from the anime... well, to be honest, I don't think that you need to explain; it's not what the fic has set out to do, so although some people might want it, it's not necessary.
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Title: Too lazyt to log in
Reviewed By: (Dark Angel 666) On: October 18, 2004 18:15 CDT
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OMG! YOU SO HAVE TO PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP SOON!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 00:13 CDT
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Pretty good so far...I can't wait to see-I mean read more...keep up the good work and update soon.It would be cool if you brought Brock and Tracy (Who is a pansey) back into the picture but it's up to you...anyway RYL (Review You Later)
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Reviewed By: Psiberkiwi On: October 04, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Yes, you did indeed write the completed story "Miss Discovery", as well as the incomplete "Nightmare Syndrome" (hint, hint, please complete)... As for "Closure", keep up the good work, but try not to make Ash too gormless (he has gained a few smarts over the years, believe it or not), and I'm sure that May and Max would much prefer to be in Petalburg rather than the mortuary...
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Reviewed By: gladdecease [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 16:21 CDT
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Ahh...very cute! Do what you like w/ the story - based on your other works, it'll be great regardless. The only thing I suggest is that you somehow explain how Brock, Max, and May didn't come with Ash (and make sure he didn't do what he ended up doing). One last thing: how could the boat have left with Ash's sleeping bag if the ferries were shut down because of the dangerous weather? It just doesn't add up...anyway, can't wait for another chapter...later!
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