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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read the lucky ones a couple of months ago on another site (one where you can't review) and i want to say that is was an amazing story. you have pure talent and i love your writing style. all of your stories are stories that you can ead over ad over again. pleae update soon. this story and your one-shot were also amzing. you have a gift, you could probably write originals and get them published and make a lot of money. but make sure you don't abandon this story!
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Title: BtW
Reviewed By: fire kitsune 15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 09:51 PDT
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I am Currently an Arizona Resident so any questions you want answers to can come strait from the gila monsters mouth ;) if you don't have anything to ask thats cool too but i have first hand knowledg your choice
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: fire kitsune 15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing style especially the inu-youkia. There were 1 or 2 spelling mistakes but they are soo easily overlooked that I don't care to much. i love how you use and intermingle the culturesshows major creativity and originallit when you make up the new youkia. this fic keeps me at the edge of my seat just waiting to see what you'll throw out next. so since i love all your stories so much i give you an overall rating of 110% BTW please update asap
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Reviewed By: Fateema On: May 20, 2005 15:22 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love your work. Kind've enjoying seeing Kagome & Inuyasha in America and by the way - Yukio, ooh I would have his babies. Can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I finished reading The Lucky Ones just a couple of months ago, and I cannot tell you how much I loved that story. When I discovered the other day that you were in the process of writing the sequel here, I was positively ecstatic! Anyway, since they limit review length on this site (grr) I couldn't even begin to discuss all the things I love about this fic (and Lucky Ones), so suffice it to say that I am positively in love with Yukio, and I have been dying to see him get on with his life and find someone new. Also, I absolutely adore this 'universe' that you've created for them. I hadn't realized how much I'd missed living in this little world until I read that oneshot you wrote for it (don't remember the title. Love that too, btw -- *grin*), and then went on to discover this fic. Love, love, love it! Anyway, please, please update soon...
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Reviewed By: just curious On: May 19, 2005 09:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no update since feb. did you leave. are you leave the story unfinished. oh say it isn't so
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Reviewed By: Annie Tang On: May 16, 2005 18:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! I love your stories.. they're so original and you rarely have any spelling and grammer mistakes... This story is really good..I love the plot.... please update!!
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Reviewed By: a big fan On: May 15, 2005 21:23 PDT
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i really enjoy reading your story. i hope that you are going to up date soon. i look forward to it
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Reviewed By: Lukeekul On: May 15, 2005 20:33 PDT
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Pleeeeaaaassse update! Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Aleash On: May 09, 2005 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Lucky Ones on fanfiction.net and I just loved. You work your stories so well. I can only dream of achieving stories and other writings that can measure up to you. I love all the detail you put in; it really makes the characters seem rounder and the plots more believeable. I know you probablely get awesome reviews like this all the time and thrive for any kind of criticism, but there really isn't anything average readers and reviews, like me, can say. Although there will be those luck few who will find some sort of constructive criticism they can lend. P.S. I know life can get a little hetic sometimes, but an update would be awsome. Thanks a bunch!
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Reviewed By: oldham On: May 09, 2005 07:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the world/universe you created and am thrilled to see a sequel to Lucky Ones! I actually ordered the book/publication of it and read it often. I love Yukio and want him to be happy in this story. But can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE?!!! You are a magnificent author and I check all the time to see if this story has been updated, and it has not been since february. I understand the real life tends to get in the way and that you may be unable to update right now. I would greatly appreciate it however, if you could possibly let me know when or if you will be continuing this story! I can be contacted at Tuborgwolf@msn.com. Your work is fantastic and I pray I will see more of it soon. Blessed Be!
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Reviewed By: Jilly Bean On: May 03, 2005 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooooooooo glad you've decided to write a sequel to the Lucky Ones and will be telling all my friends that were so in love with the original that hey - even more Inukaggy goodness! I heart Yukio!!!
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Reviewed By: lazzykane7 On: April 26, 2005 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i'm waiting PLEEEEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tricyclipede On: April 24, 2005 12:43 PDT
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Pretty, pretty, pretty please update! Otherwise I'll cry for an undisclosed period of time!
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: April 23, 2005 23:10 PDT
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I know I have posted before but I love your stories ... I keep reading this one and The Lucky Ones over and over again. They are beautifully written. You have a gift with words. I hope you update soon.
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