| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 13:11 PST
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YEAH!!! you updated. I love your fics. I think the young mother though is pretty convincing and the grandmother is really cool. i can't wait for your next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bounces* its been updated, YAY!! I was worried there for a while that this had been abandoned. THis is a very good chapter, and brings many things to question. I wonder what the cayote is leading them towards? Looking forwards to the answer to many questions. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 10:46 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. PLEASE don't wait too long to update again! This is a really good story and I want to know what happens next! Update soon please and keep up the good work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you decited yo update your fic, it's been forever! I hope you get a chance to update again soon. I want to know more about what happend to Temeh.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 08:20 PST
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I am so glad to see a new chapter I think I will re read lucky ones again too
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 06:50 PST
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I am thrilled that you are working on this again. Right now I'm just finishing up a re-reading of the Lucky Ones, which is still, IMO, one of the best pieces (arguably the best) I've ever read on a fanfic site. I do hope you are still working on getting a piece professionally published, but welcome back to this story anyway.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 05:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet mana from heaven...I'd almost given up hope, but here it is, and how it does trap me once more. I hope your dreams are filled with insperation for this one, because I'm selfish and I'd like to see more for this story.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 02:35 PST
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Wooo!! An update! I'm so glad you haven't left this fic! Great chappy- keep up the gud work!
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 22:43 PST
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! i had just finished reading the lucky ones the other day too...i've missed reading your stories terri...its a pleasure to be seeing you writing again...as i said, i've missed it...i hope things are well with you..take care till the next update and thank you again for updating! tessie
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Reviewed By: Sugarhighs:P [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 22:18 PST
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Wonderful; another great chapter. The setting and the characters are well woven together. The dialogue is intriguing and builds upon the mood. ~Jessica
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Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 21:23 PST
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An absolute pleasure- and a very anticipated chapter! A nice little bump forward in the story, and a delightful reintroduction to a fiction that has long held a thrilling place in my heart. I knew the update would come someday, and I was so excited to see the notification in my email! I really look forward to the description of Temeh (forgive me if I spelled that wrong) because I would love to draw him! Take care, and I hope you don't feel pressured for the next installment- I know you can't force a muse! -Tanya
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Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 21:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter in particular felt more transitional than anything else, but hey, if it got you going, and leads into plot points and drama, it's great. I was overjoyed to get the update notice. I hope to see more developments in further chapters. I may have to go back and re-read quite a bit...
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Title: Good to Have You Back!
Reviewed By: Crimson Dawns Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 21:02 PST
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Awesome work Terri, I found Lucky Ones by chance one day and then found this story, Thanks so much for updating...I just adore Yukio!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent and much anticipated chapter to this phenominal story. Thank you for the update. I know that you probably have many distractions in real life that have kept you from writing as regularly as you might like so the fact that you have been able to write anything is greatly appreciated. Hopefully, you will be able to write another chapter sometime soon, but, if not, then I will patiently wait until you do. Take care. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 20:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapt! Took me awhile to read it b.c MM.org was being a pain lo. I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work :-)
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