| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 16:49 PDT
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eeep! another exciting chapter. i totally didn't expect about emma... that totally had me all @_@ wha? LOL, excellent chappie though. I MUST READ MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: StefiKittie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 16:32 PDT
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Wow, awesome action going on. I hope the fighting ends soon though...so no more people get hurt. So Emma is a miko, huh? Who'd of thought. :) Awesome chapter, thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:03 PDT
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I have been very neglectful. I have not read any of your new chapters until now. I am glad you were finally able to continue it. You scared me for awhile by not writing for so long. I thought something had happened to you. Ordinarily I would say "can't wait for the next one" but since I too have been neglectful of my writing for the past year I won't. Great job!
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 15:33 PDT
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i love your storywriting, so, plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update! (i am SOOOOO not trying to be a pain: which is the reason i haven't uploaded any of MY fics yet--horrible procrastinator, with frequent writers block, am i--so, i DO feel your pain.) and, i get it how with all the traditions and customs involved in this story it can take a bit to research and tweak...i'm sorry to say that patience isn't my strongest virtue (though, you DO seem to always make these chapters worth the while), but i guess, like TLO, it's a labor of love. i'll try to be patient. *sniff*
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Title: awe!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! please update I have to know whats going to happen. she's a good woman lets keep her please (looking up with puppy inu eyes wimpering) I'm still laughing at sessie doing something to inuyasha business because he didn't ask for help. lol how funny sessie haven't an temper tanturm.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy!! Another chapter well done! I really enjoyed this chapter, and I'm most definitely looking forward to the next. I'm hoping I'm safe to assume that the jaki he felt was from the Terror Bats?? Just a wild guess. I'm really anxious to read chapter 9. Job well done and I'll see you on the next update...pay no attention to the jerk-offs who think it's your sole goal in life to update...pshhh...
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Reviewed By: Kota Magic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've read "Lucky Ones" before and loved it. Now that I've found (yes, it WAS kinda hard to find this once i heard it existed!) and read what's up of this one, I direly want to see more! I know a some of the coyote folklore, such as his stupid idea of juggling his eyes and the fact that every time he gets himself killed, it's his brother, Fox, who has the responsibility to revive him by jumping over him 3 times. You said that death threats make you write more quickly? Very well then --- GET YOUR ASS TO WORK ON THIS OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND HOLD YOU AT KNIFEPOINT UNTIL THIS STORY IS DONE!!!!!!!! There, will that work? LOL Excellent story! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 13:46 PDT
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Hey! What the hell!??!?!?! Your update timeing is like crap!! Your started it in frickin 2004!! Anyways, I love the story but I had to get that of my chest. I saw your update times and shit a brick. I love the whole turmoil on Yukio. It's nice that Emma has a real Kagome quality to her. Even the idiocy to defy her protector and try to help. That's almost gotten Kagome killed on several occasions. Oh And do what you did with Lucky Ones. HAve like a 3 chapter epilouge so that you have all the deatails. Peter is so kawaii!! Update more frequently!! Thank you for listening to my banter.
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Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and its predisor. Love your characters. Thank you for the update! So excited cant wait to see what happens next. Again love your character development and insites. Now what kind of death threats do you prefer ;) the normal Death vs chocolate? or more of will be hunted down and killed if you dont continue. I mean I willing to do whatever, however if you would just prefer a fangirl squeal hug/glomp and a excited chatter about how great your work is I am more than willing to do that too. I really sincerly love your work.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 20:39 PDT
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That is just a mean way to end a chapter. :P can't wait for the next one. Your stories are just so amazing and I always have fun rereading them. ^_^ i love how we see how much Yukio really wants to be a father and how badly he was treated by his human mate. It makes me sad to see him so sad but I hope that he will get the chance to be that parent. ^_^ ca'nt wait for the next chapter. Thank you!
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Title: Good to See You Back!
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent story, from a most skilled and capable writer. Please update soon. This story makes a most worthy continuation of the prior work, and it is always a pleasure to read your material.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 05:10 PDT
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Aigggh! Not another 4 months cliffy, please. *wimper* Learning more about Yukio's history was great and I really liked seeing him on his on and dealing with the threat.
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 21:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you cannot leave me like this!!! When are you going to up-date? It has to be soon! Please!
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Reviewed By: kitsune-koinu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 09:05 PDT
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^_^ Nice chapter!
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 07:50 PDT
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Ohhhhh! Yukio so deserves his own child! And it will be so thrilling seeing Inuyasha fighting again. Hope neither of the hanyou had lost their ability in combat after so long of a relative calm life. As usual, great job!
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