| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting that yukio & emma are getting along... hope they do get together... wonder what will happen at the laughing ceremony... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I'm always excited when you post a new chapter. I can't imagine how hard it must be for you to find time to write something that's just for fun. Thank you for continuing this fanfic. We all love it.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 20:01 PDT
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Sweet stuff, but it's bordering on trite. You are repeating yourself, particularly in the exposition.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:40 PDT
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I wish I could express why I love your story so much. When I got the alert - each time I get an alert - it's like getting flowers just because, or seeing an old friend just after thinking about them. I so enjoy the interaction of your characters, you have very normal conversations and wonderful humor. I eagerly await your next installment. Thank you for sharing your Inuyasha world.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:40 PDT
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This is a great story! I'm glad you're still finding time to continue it. I love the little bits of Navajo lore that you are able to slip into your story. The Laughing Ceremony sounds like a lot of fun. I can't wait until Emma and Yukio start growing closer.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:18 PDT
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A good chapter and an interesting First Laugh belief. I was wondering, what made you decide to do this story based on the Najavo (sorry for sp) traditions? I agree with the message though, I'm only 19 but even I know the world is getting ahead of itself these days.
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Reviewed By: Chaos_harbinger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 01:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell in love with your story The Lucky Ones and have read it over and over because it is such a good read. I was delighted to find that you had continued with it in the form of Coyote Child. It is not finished yet, and I understand you have other things, so I will wait for updates. Funny little side note, before I had heard about Coyote child, I started writing my own fanfiction about your story. Just think, a fan fic about a fan fic, how interesting. It'll never see the light of day of course, it was just for my own amusment.
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Reviewed By: iluvinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sooo good!! Please keep on writing it because I don't think I could go another like 4 months without a new chapter. =]
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just as good, if not better, than LO. Though LO made me cry (for several chapters) and laugh out loud too!!! To be able to get me that emotionally envolved in a story, you are most talented!! Now here you go again with another wonderfully written, emotionally entwining story that I now have to patentiently wait for you to update. (I bawled every time Yukio reminced of his late mate & her selfishness!) Oh well, I'll be praying to Kami that Yukio gets his head out of his rear end soon and gives poor Emma a chance! *WINK*
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Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad u started another story in The Lucky Ones world! i really love that story and this one is just as good. I really hope that Yukio and Emma can be together!!!! Update SOON
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: gundamneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I am very critical and picky about what I read. However, I have very much enjoyed this story. I fell in love with Lucky One, and just now found out that there was a sequel. I can not wait for the next chapter. I am anxious to know what happens between Yukio and Emma ^_^ .
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 02:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story. Definitely worthy to be a sequel to The Lucky Ones! I really like Yukio, he's such an interesting character. I hope he'll swallow his grief soon enough and at least give Emma a chance. Though at first I had my doubts about her. Figuring she was a little too eager, but I might be just paranoid. ;) I really hope you'll continue to update this one, and that it will be more frequently than it has been. ;) I know you've had a lot of work to do with your books and all. And I really hope they will be sold in Sweden. I'd definitely buy a copy!
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 00:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, almost as good as The Lucky Ones. ^_^ I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 21:22 PST
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Oooh, I like your concept for this story. I have spent some time on a Navajo reservation, and I love how you are incorporating some of their culture into the story. And as in the story before this, it promises to be good!
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 02:25 PST
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This one is turning out just as good as Lucky Ones. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens. Thanks! These are really beautiful fanfictions. I don't think I've ever laughed or cried so much during any other ones I've read. Thanks again.
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