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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 10, 2004 11:47 PDT
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Oh poor Yukio. I hope this Emma girl can do something for him! Once again, great chapter, great story!
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Reviewed By: Lara Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 11:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm falling for this few fic just as quickly as I did for "The Lucky Ones". I'm rooting for Yukio and Emma. I'm usually a sucker for spin-off pairings... speaking of, I'm curious to know whatever became of Ayumi and Miroku. I liked them together also. I hope we can see a bit more of them in future too. Oh and the name Loki is perfect!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 11:21 PDT
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awww... poor Yukio... update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: ali_cat929 On: October 10, 2004 10:04 PDT
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AWWWW Poor Yukio. *huggles*
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 08:54 PDT
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Great perspective in view: Yukio and Emma! At least now Yukio's crying. Maybe he's beginning to accept that Miaka's dead, that he can move on and be happy once again. Great chapter!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:57 PDT
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Poor Yukio. Great chapter. Everything I've read of yours has been amazing. Please keep up the great writing.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet job, keep up the great work, I can't wait for your next chapter. ^U^
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:35 PDT
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Oh, very well done. :) The tension between Yukio and Emma is palpable and delicious.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:19 PDT
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1886 by William Van Hume, one of Canada's great Railroad Barons. RB doesn't need to be capitalized. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I'm glad that Tetsu got mentioned. If it's been seven years, then he'd be 21 and in college, right? ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ 'Mayday. Mayday.' . . . ....MYYAAAAAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHAAA!! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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Reviewed By: MrVampire On: October 10, 2004 06:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the end of the second chater is so sad. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: October 10, 2004 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still in tears over the last part of this chapter. Poor Yukio! I always thought that he was short-changed in The Lucky Ones (which of course is a brilliant story) - the depth of his pain over the loss of his mate was only spoken of, but never explored. I'm glad that it will be explored now. Your writing is lovely - I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 09, 2004 19:39 PDT
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yay! you came through with another Lucky Ones Universe fic! im so happy! this made my day! cant wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 23:06 PDT
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I am very pleased with your decision to write another story in "The Lucky Ones" universe. Also is it still possibe to purchace one of your paperback copies of the story. If so please e-mail me with the info.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definently going to be an interesting story. I loved 'The Lucky Ones' and now I am really looking forward to reading this one. Good luck and can't wait. ^.~
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i am so happy you decided to write another story in the Lucky Ones universe! now i have something to read! awesome job and please update soon :)
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