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| "Where We Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kitsunerose On: July 14, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very lovely little fic. It made me want to cry. I hope you write more like it.
| Title: Sob snifle sob
Reviewed By: youkaimusashi (not signed in) On: April 03, 2005 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::bursts into tears:: Why oh why? Me loves happy endings! But YM loves a wonderful read and damn even if I avoid angsty fics I HAD to read Trusuprise's fic cause she's so freaking talented and knows it :) And in all honesty, I absolutely loved this fic. You made This YM cry for the 2nd time! (1st time being in Corporate Deception! And I didn't even Like Kanna before your fic!) WWB was wonderfully written, IC from both POV's, and I adored it although I'm now growling at you for not giving me a happy ending lol. Seriously, this was amazing, as always. I particularly enjoyed the POVs, they were perfect. Man I hate the dead clay bit-err...resurrected miko. But but but...poor Inu and poor Kags! ::sobs on your shoulder:: Best drama fic nom from me, you can be sure of that hon! Still using up all my tissues...::snifle:: Keh I forgive you :) And if you can get an emotional reaction like that from YM, who doesn't cry often w/series, movies, books or fics...well all I can say is: Awesome :) Oh! And ::hugs:: YM
| Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it and i think you should continue it by syaing if she evr gets to see Inuyasha and the feudal era again!! think you should say... Kagome opens her eyes and is suddenly shooken when she realises she is in Kaede's hut... "The wish you made was granted, we are all where we belong now Kagome...." Kagome heard someone from the back of her say. "Inu..Inuyasha?" "yes love?" "I wished for all of us to be where we belonged and for you and Kikyou to be happy... what happened? why am i still here?" "Your wish for us to be where we belonged cancled the wish for me and Kikyou to be together because this is where you truely belong, with me,sango,miroku,shippou,kaede and the village" "also, your other wish for everyone that was killed in Naraku's path to be alive was granted and everyone is outside..." I think you should do something like that... It would be a great second chapter/sequel!!!
| Title: ::tears::
Reviewed By: paige89(im cryin now T_T) On: October 11, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED it!!! for awile i was thinkin it wouldnt end sadly, and i was all like that would be boring. but you didnt do it. in fact, you made it WAY sad. he loved her w/ all his heart, and wanted to tell her. she loved him w/ all her heart, and just wanted him to be happy. they were so in love, but it just wasnt meant to be, and no matter what they did or could have done, the fact is is that it could never be. i find that depressing, but i must say AWSOME FIC.
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