| "Sesshoumaru's Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: evilsmiley0688 On: January 23, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i really love how funny this story is and am working on a few of my own stories...i just am a bit confused as to why the sudden charctor change is sesshomaru .... well its good any way and im really in a hurry to hear the ending so write faster!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: January 11, 2005 18:33 CST
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YUS!!! UPDATE!!! i like this story, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: jman303 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful simply wonderful it is better than the actual show more humor more everything plz update soon from a great person, jman303
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:49 CST
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Laughter galore in this chapter. And the whole Inu/Kouga thing? Well let's see. I like them as they are right now. They can sort of like Don Knotts and Time Conway or Abbot and Costello. But as a couple well, I won't steer that way. Great bit you added and hope for more.
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: miroku's wench On: January 10, 2005 17:49 CST
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hi hyatt excel is slowing ridding her fear of internet use at school for not school stuff. she wants to say good job and phew...was that close love da fic, want new chappy, this is the fastest she's eva typed in her life bye!^_^
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Title: Jig time!
Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 17:39 CST
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I'm not to sure what you mean necessarily by throwing Kouga and inuyasha together, but right now it looks like the start of a beautiful relationship/friendship! And all I can think about now is Kouga doing a jig and out tapping the Lord of the Dance (Michael Flaherty?). Heheh. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Sesshoumaru's Flame
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 23:38 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:55 CST
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i love ur story its cool and i know i probably already said this but its true ur story is really great and love it so plz update it and try to make tem long and i know ur doing it and its also hard to make them long so just try to make them as long as want and try to update no matter how much reviews u get because their is ppl who like ur storys but just dont right reviews so just keep on upddating besides i hate it when ppl do thtat it just gets on my nerves well i got to go know bye
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:27 CST
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I hope you feel better soon. Great chapter. But one question. Just how far did Sesshoumaru get once he left her in his chambers? That would really be interesting. Is he able to move about the manor, since she is within? Just some questions. And for a hint on writing, add the answers within your story. Adds more to write about and gives the answer to all readers. Cause we all know that not every one read the a/n'. Keep it up and try to feel better soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:47 CST
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short chappy get short review...I like and i want more :D 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:20 CST
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this is funny and i like it i hope there is more greatness ahead 'orion
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:33 CST
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Um, good chapter. Kind of short but that's okay. But you might want to double check your sentences. Some words didn't belong, and that made it hard to understand. Keep going though, nice work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 23:16 CST
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Very interesting. I like the idea. It is a little different then the norm. Thank you. Oh, I can't wait till we meet Rin. Oh, and maybe something the shows what the rest of the gang is up to. I am sure they are worried about Kagome. Well maybe not Inuyasha. But there is Sango and the other two guys. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:13 CST
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plz can u update i really love ur story
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Reviewed By: ????????? [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:12 CST
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i love ur story can u polz update
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