| "Sesshoumaru's Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: Sesshoumaru's Flame
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 23:38 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:55 CST
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i love ur story its cool and i know i probably already said this but its true ur story is really great and love it so plz update it and try to make tem long and i know ur doing it and its also hard to make them long so just try to make them as long as want and try to update no matter how much reviews u get because their is ppl who like ur storys but just dont right reviews so just keep on upddating besides i hate it when ppl do thtat it just gets on my nerves well i got to go know bye
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 21:27 CST
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I hope you feel better soon. Great chapter. But one question. Just how far did Sesshoumaru get once he left her in his chambers? That would really be interesting. Is he able to move about the manor, since she is within? Just some questions. And for a hint on writing, add the answers within your story. Adds more to write about and gives the answer to all readers. Cause we all know that not every one read the a/n'. Keep it up and try to feel better soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:47 CST
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short chappy get short review...I like and i want more :D 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:20 CST
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this is funny and i like it i hope there is more greatness ahead 'orion
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:33 CST
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Um, good chapter. Kind of short but that's okay. But you might want to double check your sentences. Some words didn't belong, and that made it hard to understand. Keep going though, nice work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 23:16 CST
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Very interesting. I like the idea. It is a little different then the norm. Thank you. Oh, I can't wait till we meet Rin. Oh, and maybe something the shows what the rest of the gang is up to. I am sure they are worried about Kagome. Well maybe not Inuyasha. But there is Sango and the other two guys. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:13 CST
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plz can u update i really love ur story
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Reviewed By: ????????? [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:12 CST
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i love ur story can u polz update
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Reviewed By: Kyuuka_tenchi_of_darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fis is very interesting im just a budding Author but i dont post fics i might one day but your stort is very integing sp? well i just hope you make another chapter soon Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Kyuuka_tenchi_of_darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fis is very interesting im just a budding Author but i dont post fics i might one day but your stort is very integing(sp?) well i just hope you make another chapter soon ~Ja Ne~
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Title: silver_wolf
Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 16:12 CST
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hmmm.... interesting.. continue.....
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 22:37 CDT
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it doesn't suck!!! i really like it and i hope you'll keep working on it! and pleez update!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likey so please update soon ok.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Keep it up!!!
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