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"Wolf Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: hellsbit_ch@hotmail.com [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2005 12:21 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
This review is over the allowed character limit. Please visit one of the two links for the complete review. http://www.livejournal.com/users/hellsbit_ch/9380.html OR http://hellsbitch.blogspot.com/2005/01/adding-another-to-growing-pile.html
 Reviewed By: Silver Fang [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
oh i forgot my name(bangs head on desk hile murmurin :stupid stupid stupid me)it is Nicole Takanashi
 Reviewed By: Silver Fang [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry ran outr of space Likes:reading,training to my maximumn,sports love sweet snow and candy ,i usually get sugar high,love to keep to myself and not be a burden and i love to annoy hiei and confuse kuwabaka i mean bara and i love the color black .Dislikes: peppy people, loud places,pinl,shopping and seeing people who think o much of themselves.Paireing:either hiei r kurama u chose.
 Reviewed By: Silver Fang [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 10:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Name: Age:16 Sex:Female Race:a fox dark demon Apperance:has midnight black hair that goes down to my butt always straight or in a low braid ,is as tall as kurama ,has chocolate brown eyes in demon form has emerald eyes ,well built. Demon form:picture youko but has black ears 4 black tails with a tip of red on each tail,and my outfit is a red top that shows my stomach has sleves ,i am barefoot,and black pants that go a little bit more down after the hips and wears 10 bracelets on each wrist. Powers:all elemants strongest is darkness weakest is light. Attacks: sinning whip: it is a black whip that has red pointy thorns in it and whenever the person is touched by it it will either but the person in a coma like state or kil the person depends on the user.For light it is Dragon of light :a dragon that is surrubded by electrcity and attacks the opponent or it"s master if she hasn't mastered it yet what it do es is it sends a shock of 1,456volts in your body and kills you then the dragon devores you.for fire it would be:Fire Storm :it will start raining little balls of fire that will burn ur skin. Class: an upper A class demon. Past: clan was attacked by wolves and killed can except for u .i hen fled to nigenka to enhance mypowers where i was trained by genkai but one day when i was goinng to train with her i found a note that se was dead filled with rage i went to Mt.Fugi and trained for 4 yr continuesly then after that i went to kurama school were i have been so far.

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