| "The King's Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 20:02 CST
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i luv it! You kno how to add the history and the story together without making it sound boring! Update soon please!!!
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Title: Star Weaver
Reviewed By: Star Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story very much but upon reading the last chapter i found this mistake..."his was no surprise considering the fact that Henry's current wife, Queen Katherine, was the nephew of Spain's current emperor, Charles, and the young man would have the head of the man who so disgraced and dishonored his aunt all for the sake of the Great Whore of England." It would make more sense to say 'Aunt' instead of nephew or rearrange the sentence. Sorry im a little nit picky and i sat there rereading tht phrase until i finally figured it out. Or maybe im just a loser wiht no life so i wait for updates and then pick them appart. ANywaz...Great story and i hope you update very soon!
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Title: genious
Reviewed By: Netterisbetter On: March 11, 2005 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has so become one of my new favorite fics. I love how you used the Onigumo/Naraku transition to work as a corruption in jail. Will Naraku every be able to revert back and forgive her? And the fact that you are able to update so many chapters in a short amount of time is wonderful as well. I hope that this intruging plot continues and that nothing too distructive happens to Kikyo (though I dont see how it couldnt since she needs to be out of the picture for Kagome to be Queen). Please keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anh On: March 10, 2005 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think every thing is a 10 because your story is so sweet and I just love everything about it. I think it was so sweet their kiss, i mean. Your story is very very good in my terms especially the relationship between Kagome, Kikyo, and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: March 08, 2005 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i TOTALLY love your writing!! its so mind-capturing and wonderfully alluring! my only question is...how come it only had SEVEN reviews? Well, now including mine, eight...this deserves a thousand and more! :P the other people just don't DESERVE to review this fantastic piece of fanfiction..^0^ i absolutely adore your storyline and how you have portrayed your characters in a refreshing, change of point of view! another thing that was totally great: no spelling mistakes and its VERY original! heh, i wish i had HALF the talent you do...i nearly broke down crying when the last chapter ended! i also appreciate the fact that you were considerate of the READER'S feelings and made the chapters LONG! I just hope that you will update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I simply love it. I just read all the chapters posted and I couldn't stop. You effectivly built a story of passion and drama in a setting that is both historical and romamatic. I really hope you can update soon because this is truly a pleasure to read. Even though the ending is already clear you still manage to completly captivate the reader into doubting what they already know. You're doing a great job and can't wait for the next update, so do my heart and mind a favor and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: February 25, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 17:58 CDT
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 17:58 CDT
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omg! i love this story! it is so good, just like everything you write and i am thrilled beyond all reasoning that you are indeed, posting it here! i love this story and i can't wait for the update! i love kagome's fiery streak and strong attitude, even when she grew up in such a formal society. you've done a wonderful job explaining everything and i can't wait for more. i even love the fact that she is so helpless under the gaze of the king! (and what a king! let's imagine for a moment, ne?) this is a great story and i can't wait to read more, to find out how inuyasha and kagome get together. i love this story, i love all of your stories, update soon! ~hanyou-elf
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!!Plz Update soon
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 21:57 CDT
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you are doing this. It gives a whole new flavor to the story. This is definatly on of my favorites. Keep up the great work and update soon!! ^_^
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