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 Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 29, 2010 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
When I first started reading this, I just couldn't turn away, I just had to know what happened next. I laughed, I cried, I sweat from anxiety. Seriously, you should consider writing novels if you write fanfiction this well. I loved every minute of it, and I love it all the more everytime I read it over and over again. YOU ROCK THE WHOLE HOUSE!!!!!
 Reviewed By: goofy_goober  On: January 12, 2008 02:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this has to be the best fan fiction I have ever read. I cried, I laughed, and I couldn't ever get away from the computer. Your story has to be the best one out there and it is definitely not rated as it should be. The characters are in depth and you make the stories action feel so real, I feel like I am going through th highs and lows with Kagome... urging her to go on. Thank you for writing this; it was wonderful.
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2007 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really enjoyed reading it... good job... great work...
 Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2007 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
amazing story!!!! love it! u may have gotten little support for this on mediaminer, but wow! u got alot of reviews in fanfiction.net! 2991 reviews i think. amazing!
 Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 29, 2006 07:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
first off, i am outraged out how little support you got for this story. i strongly suggest you post it on other sites if you have not already. your writing was eloquint, everrything about it- p.o.v, character formation, story line...all of it...i felt like i was in a real story , a real paper back novel...if only you could publish this. to be honest, it is your writing style and constance that i strive for in my own works, tho i have noticed i have never been passionate enough about any of my stories to keep the flame lit, so to speak. congradulation on your masterpiece, i hope to see your book out soon. (p.s.- if you like either yu yu hakusho or avatar the last airbener could you perhaps write a story for them? id be the first to read it and comment every chapter lol. oh yea at the end of the story wen you rote Kagome Regina...you ment to say queen in Spanish right? cus regina is queen in spanish i believe...oh well lol au revior fox
 Reviewed By: Inu-kag15 (not signed in)  On: August 23, 2006 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed reading your story. It was really inspiring and I haven't read too many fact-based historical fan fics. I can't wait to read your newest story. Keep on writing!
 Title: Loved it so very very much!
Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2006 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really great story...It's kinda written like Mists of Avalon, which is a story about the women behind King Arthurs throne....his sister, mother, aunt and of course his wife. i like this t=story and can't understand the lack of reviews...it pulled me in, hook line and sinker...the fan art really help visulize the things my brain would refuse to show. anyway i din't see anything wrong with this story besides the fact it has too little reviews. I am going to recomend this story to the people who read Rockstar because this is truly an inspiring story that is beautifully told. i like the way kikyo was portrayed...she wasn't evil like most stories(even mine) that i have read...reading her this way makes me want to start another story in which kikyo is misunderstood. the part of her death was well written you put alot of emotion into it...making me belive she was truly gone...and i say this because i just lost a family member to cancer three days ago and i didn't realize i would only see her face in pictures until the part of the marble slab with her name on it i gold lettering cover her body for the last time. thank you for writting a truly inspiring story... a story that seems very real... so real you would expect to find his lord and grace, King inuyasha written in the history books. inudewaruika
 Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2006 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwww i love the ending its so sweet!!!!!and i love the entire fanfic...keep writing...Cheers
 Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 15, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found this fic on a list of recommended fics, and I was most definately not disappointed. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, and I love everything about it. Please update soon! ^^
 Reviewed By: Amin Vanima Mellonea  On: March 12, 2006 22:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really a great story, yet you haven't updated in a long time and it's not finished. You haven't updated since last November, and it's now four months later. i really love this story, and I was reading it on fanfiction.net, but I've been having troubles with the site, so I can't read the last two chapters. If you update here, then I don't have to worry about never knowing the end of the story. It would be really nice if you could update this. Thank you so much for writing this. Dieses ist eine wirklich große Geschichte. Danke soviel für Schreiben es. So I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. I really love this story ^_^
 Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2005 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I knew Kag would do something like that. Wow...she is so loyal...makes me want to get along with my siblings better. Beautiful writing as always. DOn't forget to update on mm.org!
 Reviewed By: Giggles-a-lot [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 13, 2005 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I luv this fic! It's one of my favorites...I absolutely luv your style of writing...you put so much feeling into it! Keep up the great work...and please update soon!
 Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2005 02:18 CST
Comment/Review:
The story is intriguing, very detailed, involving in a word great. I just keep thinking someone ought to slap Kagome for taking the martyr stand, at this rate she will be Kikyous scapegoat and sisters or not well treason to the king is not an easy crime we are talking about the heirline being mess up regardless of the Kings feelings on the matter and it would be consider high treason to the country as well, remember Katherine Howard and not to mention dishonour to the Higurashi family.
 Title: awsome!
Reviewed By: artemis the hunter [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2005 05:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really good! I hope u update more!
 Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2005 11:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story, I remember when I first started reading it, I thought it was going to be boring and not really good with information but you've got it bang on, I love your use of actually items, etc. from that day and age...keep updating I want to find out if Kagome ends up going with Koga and what will happen to King Inuyasha and (now) Queen Kikyou...
 Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2005 00:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, but it sure is taking a long time to update, hurry please! I want to find out if Kagome leaves with Koga!
 Reviewed By: Hatira  On: August 03, 2005 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job, hope you update soon! (PS: I don't currently have an account so If you could, e-mail me when you've updated --> dogearedcutie1193@hotmail.com, thanks!
 Reviewed By: abatwo  On: July 23, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is awsome but you need to review asap! it is driving me crazy!
 Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 18, 2005 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your fantastic! this story has so much in it, it's practically bursting with the wealth that you put into every character. On the less serious side, I hope kikyo's pregnant. Keep up the marvy story!
 Reviewed By: cherryblossom33  On: July 15, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
inuyasha is sooo stupid he shouldn't have marry kikyo if he feel for kagome. Kagome is an idiot for sacificing soo much for kikyo when kikyo don't even tried her best to stop the trouble with nakura. update more and soon please ! Hope you make inuyasha regret his decision.
 Title: incredible story
Reviewed By: katriona  On: July 10, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is one of the most emotional fanfics i have ever read. your writing style is amazing, and i feel like i can really connect with the characters. you've created a heart-wrenching story line, and i greatly anticipate the next chapter. i can't imagine how you feel writing these chapters. it must get so hard at times to continue creating each new part, since there's so much emotion in every word. this is the best fanfic i have read for Inuyasha. please update soon! -kat
 Reviewed By: fire_otome  On: July 07, 2005 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! can't wait for the next chapter to come up. So hurry.
 Title: Most Evil Cliffy Ever in the History of the Fandom
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2005 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
poor Kagome and Inuyasha and Kikyo, damn rules of court and all that noise, and anyway the double chapter was very engaging and I am haning on my my pinkies waiting for the next update...but I have a qestion before I go...so Inuyasha is the High King of what country have you come up with a name for it, cause it sounds close to England and France, maybe it's Atlantis or something.
 Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There is only one word coming to my mind right now....appauling....for it is truly appauling that a story such as this has so little reviews!! Your execellent writing has had me capivated for days, trying to complete the many hcapters you have posted, and i mut say i enjoyed every minute i was entranced by your words. You have such a descriptive and creative way of writing which had me lost in this world ypu created- excellent job. Your grammer and spelling is impecable, to add to everything. I feel the tragety of Kagome with such force, that i am sitting in the edge of my seat waiting for another update. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! i must continue this beautiful tale....until next time - fox
 Title: FF
Reviewed By: gimpys still kicken  On: June 25, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
keep writing ok
 Reviewed By: Manderz30(not loged in)  On: June 21, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!! I am sooooo crying right now. Please update SOON I must know what happens next. This is such a great story I really hope you win that thing you were nominated for (I can't remember what its called right now, but anywho)you totally derserve it! Once agian please update soon, not that I'm rushing I'm just so caught up in the story I can't wait to read the next chappie.
 Reviewed By: Anh  On: June 21, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love how you describe what's Kagome and Inuyasha is feeling when the ceremony started. Somehow as I read it, it seems to come to life. I hope Inuyasha will get to end with Kagome and not have anything horrible in the end. Please Update Soon! I really love wthis story and hope you'll update it asap.
 Reviewed By: Manderz30 *not loged in*  On: June 05, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love this story!! I hope you update soon! I'm so fasinated by the story. I love the time period, and how you seem to make everything come to life. I really hope that your able to update this soon.
 Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in)  On: May 27, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
 Reviewed By: Anh  On: May 21, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you'll update more since this is already summer and your story is getting better and better. I also love the chemistry between Bankotsu and Kouga. It's really cute since they both make Kagome happy in a good intention. I absolutely love the things between Kagome and Inuyasha they are so great together. I hope Kikyo would get a good ending for herself since she is not that much of a bad guy (in my opinion). Naraku/ Ominugo need to die he is torturing poor Kikyo. Anyways keep updating since it's already summer.
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