| "The King's Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Manderz30 *not loged in* On: June 05, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story!! I hope you update soon! I'm so fasinated by the story. I love the time period, and how you seem to make everything come to life. I really hope that your able to update this soon.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anh On: May 21, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you'll update more since this is already summer and your story is getting better and better. I also love the chemistry between Bankotsu and Kouga. It's really cute since they both make Kagome happy in a good intention. I absolutely love the things between Kagome and Inuyasha they are so great together. I hope Kikyo would get a good ending for herself since she is not that much of a bad guy (in my opinion). Naraku/ Ominugo need to die he is torturing poor Kikyo. Anyways keep updating since it's already summer.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for history buffs! I absoultely LOVE this time period. i have read countless books (historical fiction) about all of this. The one book i was most reminded of is called "The Other Bolyne Girl" by Philippa Greggory. You have all of the facts dead on! This story has me totally addicted to this time period again!
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Reviewed By: Manderz 30 On: May 12, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur fic! Can't wait til ya update agian! I am so falling in love with the time period here, its awsome how you play history into this. Just like Inu's kingdom really excisted! I love it, your doing awsome!
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Reviewed By: anika says hi On: May 12, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your chapter with the concert. Rochmoninov is a personal favorite of mine. I may be a bit vague about the time period you are writing in, but if I am right, the violin isn't widely used yet (in case you were wondering, I'm a music major and have just taken 4 music history classes) the viol is the violin-like instrument that precluded the violin. it's shaped a little different in the bout and has C holes instead of F holes on the body around the bridge. The isntrument also has frets. the most popular instrument of that time was the lute. just fyi, and i think the violin fits in perfectly too. your writing style is perfect and fits the time period. From one history buff to another: cheers!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: May 08, 2005 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO HOO! An incredible update; i LOVED the last few chapters; so angsty between Kagome, Kikyou and Inuyasha... i wish Kikyou wouldn't get pregnant; as much as i hate her, i wouldn't wish Naraku's baby upon ANYONE! >_
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Reviewed By: Kasha-TheInuFreak (Kagome) On: May 07, 2005 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story, please keep up the good work, and update soon. I just can't seem to tell you in words what i feel reading this story. It's the best story I've ever read in two years. Ja na, Kasha (Kagome)
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Title: my god, i love it
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a great thing to read, truly an inspiration. I could never have thought up such a thing, and definatly could not have imagined the way you tell it. When you update, I am inspired to try to write more than small one shots i never post, update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: April 23, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice!I ope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to update again?? because in march, you updated 12 times! 9 times in ONE day, and three times in another! but it is april, and you only updated it once!!! now it is half way through april, and i would like to know if you are going to give up on this fic!! please let us know!!! i want to try to QUIT checking back to see if you updated!! im too hooked...it's like an addiction!!!!!!!
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Title: :O
Reviewed By: Princess_Laura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st of all, LOVED IT! lol but i was so sad when she broke her violin... that was very depressing... *sniffle* (no i didn't really cry, im just a loser who says *sniffle*) but the way you ended it was amazing, i was like AWW because they both got wat they wanted, even though it was just for a little while... im usually not a kikyo lover, and at the beginning of this story i really hated her because she was being evil, but now youve managed to make me feel sorry for her! congratulations on an AMAZING story and please update as soon as you can because i wanna know wat happens!! but hey, no pressure! lol
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Reviewed By: Angel449 On: April 07, 2005 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome awesome story. i am a new reader and i must say your story is excellent! aw but the violin broke thats so sad *cries* i have a question. at the end of chapter 19 when it said tonight they would give each other what they wanted please tell me that just meant kissing..... update soon!
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Reviewed By: Linear On: April 06, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, but chapter ninteen was so sad though. I hope you will update soon. (not like I'm rushing you or anything, just hoping, so don't get mad okay?)
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Reviewed By: Anh On: April 04, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story's great! and your style of writing is extremely good! Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo............................. ........................................................................... .........................update as soon as possible/ whenever you're free!! remember ok? ok see ya.. It's getting so good you just gotta update!!! what's going to happen to inuyasha & kagome?????????????????
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