| "Silver Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: eh..
Reviewed By: CuddleBunny89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
im sorry.. it could really be a great story but i can only make it half way down the first page before i keep repeating to myself.. OUT OF CHARACTER OUT OF CHARACTER i cant handle that MAGNITUDE of ooc. sorry. but interesting idea.
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the stiry and a think you should continue it!!!
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