| "Offering the Extreme" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: XxDarkxStarsxX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...T_T this was so sad! There should be a sequel! Mwahaha >.> But that's just my humble opinion. ^^ You did a great job at portraying Toboe in a new light. A more mature, more adult Toboe. Very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Kodachi Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done! A second chapter or a sequel from Tsume's POV, something that gives us a hint at what he's feeling & thinking, would be great.
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