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Reviewed By: Nutmeg On: April 17, 2005 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Mr. ShenLong (Gosh I hope ur a mister...) This story is so wonderful, I can't get enough of it. I love horses with a passion, and I love Heero and Duo too. YOu have created such a romantic story and I am Dieing to find out more. I love austrailia too. ( I hope I spelled that right) Having been to that wonderful place I can relate to many thing you have been writing. I have, although, never been to a horse jumping show, and yet, I feel as if I have. Your amazingly discriptive work has drawn me into a world unlike any I have ever experienced. I saw my first horse show here and I fought death with scythe here. I have so much to thank you for. You have given me something to look forward to eagerly. Mr. ShenLong I cannot wait for the next chapter but I must ask a favor of you. Would you please send me a notice of some sort when you up date? My e-mail is megsimmons@yahoo.com, thank you. Your devoted fan-girl Megan Simmons AKA Nutmeg P.S. I love the wonderful set up you have with Duo being a vet, that is the career that I have been studying for and it gave me a shining hope amongst all of my studying. I do hope that heero finally becomes Duos full time accountant, (it IS the most sensable thing to do!) Alas my space is dwindling so I will leave you with this last sentance. Thankyou for being my shining ray of hope, you truly are a talanted man, and I respect you completely, good luck and may your pencil stay sharp!
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Reviewed By: Nutmeg On: April 17, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Mr. ShenLong (Gosh I hope ur a mister...) This story is so wonderful, I can't get enough of it. I love horses with a passion, and I love Heero and Duo too. YOu have created such a romantic story and I am Dieing to find out more. I love austrailia too. ( I hope I spelled that right) Having been to that wonderful place I can relate to many thing you have been writing. I have, although, never been to a horse jumping show, and yet, I feel as if I have. Your amazingly discriptive work has drawn me into a world unlike any I have ever experienced. I saw my first horse show here and I fought death with scythe here. I have so much to thank you for. You have given me something to look forward to eagerly. Mr. ShenLong I cannot wait for the next chapter but I must ask a favor of you. Would you please send me a notice of some sort when you up date? My e-mail is megsimmons@yahoo.com, thank you. Your devoted fan-girl Megan Simmons AKA Nutmeg P.S. I love the wonderful set up you have with Duo being a vet, that is the career that I have been studying for and it gave me a shining hope amongst all of my studying. I do hope that heero finally becomes Duos full time accountant, (it IS the most sensable thing to do!) Alas my space is dwindling so I will leave you with this last sentance. Thankyou for being my shining ray of hope, you truly are a talanted man, and I respect you completely, good luck and may your pencil stay sharp!
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Reviewed By: Joh Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Love this story. Yeah, I haven't being near a computer for a long time, and I just finished reading your fanfic, I love it! And I hope to catch the new chap pretty soon!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual this was yet another wonderful chap! Too bad same sex weddings aren't allowed. That sucks. I'm glad Heero set Duo staight about his doubt though. That was real sweet.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: April 13, 2005 23:18 CDT
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Grandioso. I love it.
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Reviewed By: yanagi(not loged in) On: April 13, 2005 20:49 CDT
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*sigh* Welcome back. this chapter was awesome. So tender. Poor Heero, trying to deal with Duo's insecurities and he did such a good job.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 13, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very cute. And I liked the *ahem* massage. VERY nice. *giggles*...anyway...please keep going and ya know I love it!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:16 CST
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I love this fic sooo much and can't wait until u add a chap..^__^
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Title: Review!!!
Reviewed By: Zicue's Here On: March 24, 2005 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read alot of fanfictions, but I don't usually comment. This one was just ao amazing!!! I like how Duo and Heero were put into new situations (I love the country) and I loved Zero so much! I'm a major fan of horses. You really know them well, so with the descriptions the readers could understand. And the dialect was wonderful! Another thing that drew me in was how they took time courting each other and were shy and respectful to each other. Then at other times they were just too cute and playful! I think I cried when Zero fell, they were so great together and that one fault in timing ruined the timing on the triple bar. But... then again, it brought Duo and Heero together. Oh! Duo as a vet! I loved the pictures that formed in my mind! (I'm already sketching him out... it was the perfect picture for him!) And how you described the surguries, well I'm glad I have a good stomach and that I don't know my anatomy enough to know what all everything was! And when Scythe came in, I felt so sorry for her! She was forgetten about and ended up with so many terrible things!!! Oh, are you going to update anytime soon??? Please!!! I was able to read all this in one sit (Wasn't such a great idea, but I couldn't turn the story away.) If you do update, send me notice!!! zicueblossom@excite.com Thank you, and I loved your story!!! -Zicue-
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Title: KOOL!
Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: March 16, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY HEY!! ur getting better..I just love how this story is going and love all the things about animals that u put into the story..i'm really happy that u added Zechs b/c i just love him sooo much..well anyway don't rush them i rally want to find out what that letter was..I just can't wait until the next chap..good luck nd have a good night..ja ne ^___^
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Kat2001 On: March 15, 2005 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really loved this chapter and all the ones before. I really wanted to know what was in that letter but according to the 1x2ML you'll explain it in the next one. I loved the part with the chicken! I never knew that acctually happens when you lay a chicken on their backs, or what happens when the wake from an anestetic. I wish you the best of luck in writing the next chapter and I hope that Heero gets good news from the accounting board. It would really sux if more problems arose for the pair, but I'm sure it is expected in a long story such as this one. Keep writing and hopefully more fun will ensue! Ja... Kat
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: March 14, 2005 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think by now you know that I love this fic, right? Now that that's out of the way...keep going please! It was fun having Zechs in the last chapter. I'm glad Heero gets to "own" Scythe.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 06:21 CST
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Poor Duo-kun is sick! Wahhh! Awww! Heero makes such a great doctor/assisstant/lover/insert occupation here type person ^_^ Update soon
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Title: ch 24
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:44 CST
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I cringed my way through reading this chapter. Perhaps it's a language difference? In the US, the flu is caused by a virus, not exposure to bad weather. The symptoms sound like the flu, but there was no mention of any of Duo's patients being sick... thus how he got infected is highly suspect. Again... might be a language difference, but probably not. Re: http://www.ppsinc.org/flu/flu06.htm (see entry beginning: Spending time outside) And actually, this page: http://www.niaid.nih.gov/factsheets/cold.htm says the same thing about colds. (See also flu: http://www.niaid.nih.gov/factsheets/flu.htm). All I know is, flu definitely sounds wrong. Especially since I don't recall any of his patients' humans being sickly. If they had, you could've argued that the cold lowered his immune system. Nice chapter otherwise. *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:13 CST
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Awww what a cute ending! Please update soon!
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