| "Equinity" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: ch 21
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:51 CST
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the 'cut lunch' seems to be the equivalent of the 'sack lunch' here in California. And I knew the thing about pecking order... cute details about your horses, though! ^_^ But what I'm curious about is the ferrier's 'ute'. What's that? Some sort of truck/van/wheeled-horse-booth-thingie?
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: February 07, 2005 00:08 CST
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Keep up the good work and loved the notes at the end..very well done..love the shower and write more soon..we are all rooting for u..^_^
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Reviewed By: Yukihiko Aine On: February 07, 2005 00:03 CST
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hey love what u did with the update..i also would like ti thank u for putting in the end about what the things mean that duo in doing to the horse..even though i love horses and work with them i do not know some of the things that i use and am happy that i get to learn more about horses and stuff like that while reading this great fic..i can't wait to see what happenes next.I love how Duo and Heero's relationship is moving along not too fast and not to slow just right..thx for this great fic and all of ur hard work that u put into making ppl happy by letting them read such great works of art and wonderful stries..plz update soon^_^..ja ne
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 14:10 CST
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I don't know how you manage it, but you throw in a bit of everything into your writing. Comedy *guffaw* (poor Hee-chan), Angst, death *sob* (poor Fluffy), and alot of other things. Keep up the good work! ~_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: February 05, 2005 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: February 04, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geat update soon!
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Title: ch 20
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 00:56 CST
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loved the footnotes... Hurrah for educational fanfic! :) Loved the shower, too.
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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 23:51 CST
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^_^;; Lost track of this story for a while... had to read eight chapters or so to catch up. I really like the slow, but steady development of Heero and Duo's romance. Quatre and Trowa cameo-ing as animal-lovers was a nice surprise... makes me wonder how Wufei will fit in. I also appreciate the fact that you take the time to explain points that might confuse a non-Australian audience.
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Reviewed By: fayli08 On: January 31, 2005 14:22 CST
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hey keep up the great work and don't forget to update soon.^^
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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I love the new updates that u made on the last 2 chaps..i really like how u tell how in Duo does what he does..in other words love the detail. i hope that the horse does turn out to be well in the end and that Duo will not have too hard a time with the riding..I'm sure that Heero will make a great trecher..by the way u described the horse i would have to say that is sounds really good..most of the stuff that Duo said about text book and real life experence i would have to agree..it is very different ..well updater soon and have a good day with whatever ur doing!^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(not logged in) On: January 30, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so very much. I like how you go into detail in explaining the procedures that Duo performs. I also like how you include definitions of what things are concerning Zero's care. I'm an animal lover myself so that last chapter really got to me. I've enjoyed all your stories that I've been able to read. You have a wonderful way with words and you go into great description and make me get lost in the story. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, story moving perfectly, love the Heero and Duo moments, loving this story. Only one problem...I want to shoot the b@##@#d that ill treated the horse at the end. Nice to see Quatre and Trowa added to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jupitor Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 09:43 CST
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Trash and treasure sounds alot like The flea market we have in New Mexico, You go they charge you for parking then you can go and look at peoples stuff and sometimes buy stuff that people make, it's really big in Alburqurque where you can buy los of indian jewelery, and stuff, i love to go and buy kachina's.
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 24, 2005 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great update and i can't wait to see what u do with the story from here!! ^_^ ...ja ne
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Reviewed By: One of the authoresses (too lazy to sign in) On: January 23, 2005 11:12 CST
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I likies! Keep up with the cute story! ~Azure
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