| "The Saiyan Facts of Life! Teaching Gohan" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: firefox 9 On: December 20, 2011 16:26 EST
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why would this be considered hot? Goku just molested his own son for gods sake! He's not a pedopile you know. And even if he was how the hell would he even be in heaven? just sick man. |
Title: Pointing something out
Reviewed By: MeMoiselfAndI On: October 13, 2011 00:38 EDT
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I thought it was amazing. Just get the next chapter up soon! Cant wait. And to the people going your sick rah rah rah, just gonna point out that NOBODY made you read it, you chose to of your own accord. So there. xo |
Reviewed By: A.K.A Contradictions On: July 21, 2007 07:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED this fic, and i really hope you write a continuation. Your goku/gohan fic is the only one i've read that is believable, the rest they are completely out of character, being able to keep them in character while writing a fic like this is VERY impressive. please, please write a continuation. :(
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Reviewed By: Gaskin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!! That Was nasty!! Get help!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Videl kills Gohan after this!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SonSofia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a shitload better than teaching Goten, but I see why you didn't want to go so far, I think. That was hot. You got better, I think I am sort of glad you didn't let it go too far with Goten and Goku. Although, I'm no stranger to incest and shota fics (wink) I love Goku and Gohan fics. They're so rare, there are probabaly more Trunks and Vegeta out there. Great job, keep it up babe!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't know what to say but I do like it.
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Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: ; ) On: May 29, 2006 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, really loved it... maybe a gokuxgohanxgoten nxt time... god im sick : p
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Saiyan Girl On: February 24, 2006 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I can't belive I read a incst and ENJOY it...It was so hot and sweet.I WANT A G/GH/V!Please.Wow
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Reviewed By: crimson_blade07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 03:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i usually prefer to read yuri's but this was exellent. i like the story line and how it wasnt just pointless. for the next chapter's maybe you can get creative and add something besides just yaoi....*thinking* yeah, there should deffinately be more yuri in the world. other than that, great job!
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Reviewed By: shred On: August 10, 2005 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wasnt sure I would like this paring, but it turned out to be the best iv read so far. 11/10
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: yaoIchiban On: May 31, 2005 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not think of another story that would suit even more for the pairing GokuXGohan. This is simply the best and I was tremendously satisfied with how it went out. It is even picturesque and I can imagine every scene for real. Even I purred with every purring in the pic they did. And much more, the justification to why they are doing this is just as great. It is definitely the best pairing of Goku&Gohan, I just wish there is still a continuation. I was definitely satisfied. Congrats and I hope there's more to come.
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Reviewed By: cyzay (not loged in) On: November 25, 2004 22:24 EST
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now that is beutiful. i love this paring when it'd done like it was. your discriptions and contrast between humans and saiya-jin were a highlight of the story. Very well done overall. also liked this use of the famous 'saiya-jin bond'. this is probably one of the best goku/gohan parings ive read. congrats!
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Reviewed By: KTR aka Atarah On: November 17, 2004 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Atarah: ummmm *blush* you don't think that you could maybe...uh...*beet red by now* Trunks: Spit it out Atarah. Atarah: maybeinthenextchapteryoucouldhavevegetaandtrunksmakeout *inhales* itcouldbelikeasagawitheveryoneyouknow,sortofgrowingupandlearningaboutsaiyan actions*inhales* iwould Trunks: Atarah! Shut up! Atarah: *stops* Trunks: Now...try again and speek slowly. Atarah:maybe... in.... the... next... chapter... Trunks: Not that slow. Atarah: you could have vegeta and trunks make out it could be like a saga with everyone you know, sort of growing up and learning about saiyan actions I would really like that. *blush* Trunks: *stares at Atarah, shocked* Atarah: *gets on hands and knees* Please! Oh please please please! I would so very much love that. *blush*
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Reviewed By: Sailor_star On: November 15, 2004 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is nasty, you need help you sick sick person, yuck, how could you write about dbz yaoi, further more, incest!!!! Plz get some help
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Reviewed By: Stud_muffin_moe On: November 15, 2004 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story, unbelieveable. I love it. You can tell you put effort in to your piece of writing, and that you were passionate about it, and it shows! Congratulations, I'm a tough critic and usually don't give out good reviews but you, you have talent, hope you write more :)
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