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"Betrayal Saga I: Yoshi's Darkside" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ]
 Reviewed By: SSJ2 Gohan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 02, 2011 13:02 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Are you allowed you review your own works? Just kidding. I enjoyed this as well. Recently and back then in 2004 as you'll see by my initial review. I think you should get back to writing Breezy Breeze. Your works were awesome. - Gohan. Still super_saiyan_gohan62@yahoo.com.
 Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2011 21:06 EST
Comment/Review:
I didn't realize I had inspired anyone with my fanfics. I kept them up because I hop to come back to them someday. Thank you for your gracious comments, and I still visit PYP from time to time (though I don't see too many interesting updates). I thought my fics needed a LOT of work--I just wasn't satisfied with them anymore. I think I should get my act together and start writing again. Thank YOU for inspiring me again!
 Reviewed By: MogniteAmbush  On: August 29, 2010 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read this fanfic ages ago. Ages and ages ago. It was the first fanfic I ever read, back on Purple Yoshi's page. You probably don't check this anymore, but in the tiny tiny chance you do, I want you to know that you are responsible for getting me into reading and writing fanfiction under a whole tonne of names. All the other fics on that page had horrible grammar/continuity, but yours was GOLD even when I was a little kid. Bless you. Bless you so damn much. :D
 Title: You are somethin
Reviewed By: Your Cousin Kent Jr.  On: March 30, 2010 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Such a vivid imagination. Colorful like a coogi. I can tell you are my blood. The imagination runs wild....Literally
 Reviewed By: divastarz 63  On: August 03, 2005 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey me again! Just wanted you to keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: divastarz 63  On: February 19, 2005 14:16 EST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! As I said in my previous reviews, I love this!! How do you know all of Koopa's children? And are you gonna put Baby Bowser in it? HEY! How about in the end you make Kammy change Mario and Bowser into babies and Bowser beats him up?? Just a suggestion though....GREAT FIC!!
 Title: Read your review
Reviewed By: Mecha Scorpion [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 07:39 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm in the habit of checking up on authors who review my stories, but I'd read this fic before you reviewed my story at all. It's pretty good. Only thing is that Yoshi vs. Peach isn't quite the epic battle you might be trying it to be. Maybe if Yoshi survives (he better) he could go for revenge on Mario. After all their teamwork, a battle like that could be good.
 Reviewed By: SSJ2 Gohan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2004 19:02 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good! I've reviewed the one in fan fics.org and it was good but this has more to it! This has nothing to do with the fic, but if you notice in Super Mario for SNES mario punches yoshi in the back of the head to get him to stick his tongue out. What abuse!
 Reviewed By: divastarz 63  On: November 21, 2004 18:51 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY!!! I loved this chapter!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
 Reviewed By: Zack/Brick  On: November 19, 2004 16:39 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE BECAUSE THIS ROCKS!
 Reviewed By: divastarz 63  On: October 15, 2004 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY THIS IS COOL!! I never thought of Yoshi in this perspective...keep up the good work! (oh and i like wat u did with Freeza too)
 Title: So...So...TRUE
Reviewed By: pukenater89 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2004 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
No one really knows why they make Yoshi take all that crap, i mean he has to carry around a Fat Plumber all day! I liked Frieza's cameo.

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