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| "Big Trouble Comes in Small Packages" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!- What a GREAT story! Really, it's one of the best I've read! Your plot and characterization is so unique, and so well written. I want to thank you for your great job with the InuYasha/Kagome relationship. I really dislike it when, (and I know other readers will back me up on this), the author of a story throws Kagome and InuYasha into a relationship right from the get-go. You did a splendid job preventing this. I also really enjoyed the whole Rin aspect of the plot. How perceptive of you to see Rin's affect on Sesshomaru and apply it to your story! It seems to be working well. The Miroku and Sango relationship is also well written. I was a little unhappy when Miroku was constantly being portrayed as a pervert and nothing else, but the cafe speech was amazing, just what was needed. Please continue to develop Miroku's character in the direction you're headed. "Big Trouble" is a wonderfully written story. I have enjoyed it immensley; please keep up the excellent work! Jin Ryu The Silver Dragon
| Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a definite talent for humor. Not just thinking up the funny stuff, but writing it in an especially funny way, maximizing the overall total funny. You handle the serious stuff just fine, too, and I really love some of the subtle ways you convey romantic sentiment (such as the "It's not like he had anything better to do for the moment. Or for the rest of his life, for that matter..." bit in chapter 13). The quality of the story is better than "Easy as 1, 2, 3", too. In that I could never quite understand why Inuyasha and Kagome fell in love (beyond the author wanting them too). In this story, though, the feelings between them grow in a much more realistic and believable manner, an improvement I'm glad to see. Or something.
| Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: June 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like you're story, I just read all of the posted chapters and can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Keep up the great work :)
| Title: i can't believe you only have 2 reviews
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read all 26 chapters and I'm impressed the story was well written and I can relate to the Rin disasters thou I was kinda hoping Kouga would show up as the push InuYasha needed to confess his feeling for Kagome. So when is Sesshomaru going to show up to pick the girl up.
| Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: June 15, 2005 13:16 CDT
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i cant believe you only have one review!! i love it! i guess some people just dont review a lot...come to think of it, i dont either. I really really really like this story and where it is going, and i LOVE all the old lady characters! I also checked out the fanart and it looks really good! I just finished what you have written on this story, and Im just about to go check out your other stories. I hope they will be as good as this one! I also like how you have rin as a little girl in this fic, so many people have an older rin paired with sesshoumaru, so its refreshing to see one with her still as a little girl. Keep it up, and update soon!
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story so far.....tho i only read the first chapter -__-; keep up the good work.
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