| "Big Trouble Comes in Small Packages" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story.. this was a hilarious fan fiction... i loved inuyasha's gift at the end.. there were so many times i laughed out-loud...lol.. great job.. thanks for writing this!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 02:08 CST
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lol.... HAHAHAHAH... the part about InuYasha's closet was hilarious..lol.....
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 01:15 CST
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haha i loved when you gave the reason for InuYasha taking Rin to the zoo.. and also good job with the kiss... did not see that coming....
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 02:44 CST
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good job with Rin on the phone with Miroku that part was hilarious..lol..... HAHAHAHA... im still laughing...Miroku is just too funny!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 01:59 CST
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HAHAHAHA the part with Sessy poo getting "lost" was hilarious... i was cracking up for a good minute..lol.... and im still laughing just thinking about it..lol
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 01:09 CST
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i liked the irony in the end of the third chapter it was rather amusing...lol..good job so far!!
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Reviewed By: KK On: August 02, 2006 22:24 CDT
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Awwwwww, that was so cute, and for somereason I feel like Im loosing a a very close friend. Leaving with this story, is a person with great words *tear*tear*. But really I will miss you so keep writing something else, and by the way that was a very cute story and I really wish you would reconsider making a sequel, for five reason 1 cuz than I get to hear from you again and 2 cuz I wanna find out if inu and kag have a girl or boy, and what he/she looks like etc 3 I wanna hear about the house they move into eventually 4 I wanna see how Sango and Miroku turn out and 5 I wanna hear about sessy-poo LMAO! So please make a sequel and if you do please put an AN(authors Note) in this so I know if you are or not. Anyways if you choose no to make a sequel that it your choice so Im gonna say my good-bye just incase. I will miss you and your word so much and I hope to hear more of your fanfics in the future but if not than I would like to say its been a plesure reading your material and your are a very creative writer with great potential(sp?) ♥Love always♥Kimiko.K♥
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 20:18 CDT
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I JUST READ THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS AND AM STILL WIPING THE TEARS OF LAUGHTER FROM MY EYES. THE IMAGE OF MIROKU GETTING FLIRTED WITH AND GROPED BY FEISTY OLD LADIES IS RICH.
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Reviewed By: gomeyasha On: July 31, 2006 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!That was an excellent story.Please update soon.I'm dying to find out what InuYasha plans to do about his little "sitchuation"{did i spell that right?}being in his house all alone. Excuse my saying, but what he said sounded a little KINKY doesn't it?!I wounder whats gonna happen?!N E Way u r n excellent writer/story- maker...or whatever.
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 30, 2006 22:46 CDT
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I have been following this story since like grade eghit and Im now in grade ten( so its been along time)b ut the reason is cuz I fell inlove with this story and also cuz it took you so long to update, but finally you started updating again and I was thrilled to no bounds. So anyways your a great writer. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dog gal On: July 20, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story a lot. I am a huge fan of the characters from the show, so it was hard at first for me to see an older shippo, and kagura not really as an enemy. Other than that I loved the romance between Inuyasha and Kagome, Keep it up!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: July 11, 2006 13:30 CDT
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I like your story I hope you up date so. I think some of the chapter readly funny to read.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cool, you updated! I like the chapter. It's so sad about Inuyasha's past, but I love the way they came together at the end of it! There's more, right? Then please, update soon! ^_^
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your writing style is amazing! I adore this story and I hope that you will finish it. I have been a long time fan of your works and I thing Easy as 1,2,3 was the first fanfiction I have ever read. Your knack for comedy is refreshing and I really enjoy stories that can make me laugh, cry or any other type of strong emotion. In this case, laugh. Kudos to you and keep writing. I can't believe you only have seven reviews but I'm sure you get much more on ff.net. Oh and I found your disclaimers really enyoyable. Excellent work. Update soon. Needless to say, you are on my favourites.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 15:21 CDT
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PINK!Oh yes, it had to be pink!
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