| "Big Trouble Comes in Small Packages" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: KK On: August 02, 2006 22:24 CDT
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Awwwwww, that was so cute, and for somereason I feel like Im loosing a a very close friend. Leaving with this story, is a person with great words *tear*tear*. But really I will miss you so keep writing something else, and by the way that was a very cute story and I really wish you would reconsider making a sequel, for five reason 1 cuz than I get to hear from you again and 2 cuz I wanna find out if inu and kag have a girl or boy, and what he/she looks like etc 3 I wanna hear about the house they move into eventually 4 I wanna see how Sango and Miroku turn out and 5 I wanna hear about sessy-poo LMAO! So please make a sequel and if you do please put an AN(authors Note) in this so I know if you are or not. Anyways if you choose no to make a sequel that it your choice so Im gonna say my good-bye just incase. I will miss you and your word so much and I hope to hear more of your fanfics in the future but if not than I would like to say its been a plesure reading your material and your are a very creative writer with great potential(sp?) ♥Love always♥Kimiko.K♥
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 20:18 CDT
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I JUST READ THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS AND AM STILL WIPING THE TEARS OF LAUGHTER FROM MY EYES. THE IMAGE OF MIROKU GETTING FLIRTED WITH AND GROPED BY FEISTY OLD LADIES IS RICH.
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Reviewed By: gomeyasha On: July 31, 2006 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!That was an excellent story.Please update soon.I'm dying to find out what InuYasha plans to do about his little "sitchuation"{did i spell that right?}being in his house all alone. Excuse my saying, but what he said sounded a little KINKY doesn't it?!I wounder whats gonna happen?!N E Way u r n excellent writer/story- maker...or whatever.
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 30, 2006 22:46 CDT
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I have been following this story since like grade eghit and Im now in grade ten( so its been along time)b ut the reason is cuz I fell inlove with this story and also cuz it took you so long to update, but finally you started updating again and I was thrilled to no bounds. So anyways your a great writer. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dog gal On: July 20, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story a lot. I am a huge fan of the characters from the show, so it was hard at first for me to see an older shippo, and kagura not really as an enemy. Other than that I loved the romance between Inuyasha and Kagome, Keep it up!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: July 11, 2006 13:30 CDT
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I like your story I hope you up date so. I think some of the chapter readly funny to read.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cool, you updated! I like the chapter. It's so sad about Inuyasha's past, but I love the way they came together at the end of it! There's more, right? Then please, update soon! ^_^
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your writing style is amazing! I adore this story and I hope that you will finish it. I have been a long time fan of your works and I thing Easy as 1,2,3 was the first fanfiction I have ever read. Your knack for comedy is refreshing and I really enjoy stories that can make me laugh, cry or any other type of strong emotion. In this case, laugh. Kudos to you and keep writing. I can't believe you only have seven reviews but I'm sure you get much more on ff.net. Oh and I found your disclaimers really enyoyable. Excellent work. Update soon. Needless to say, you are on my favourites.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 15:21 CDT
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PINK!Oh yes, it had to be pink!
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!- What a GREAT story! Really, it's one of the best I've read! Your plot and characterization is so unique, and so well written. I want to thank you for your great job with the InuYasha/Kagome relationship. I really dislike it when, (and I know other readers will back me up on this), the author of a story throws Kagome and InuYasha into a relationship right from the get-go. You did a splendid job preventing this. I also really enjoyed the whole Rin aspect of the plot. How perceptive of you to see Rin's affect on Sesshomaru and apply it to your story! It seems to be working well. The Miroku and Sango relationship is also well written. I was a little unhappy when Miroku was constantly being portrayed as a pervert and nothing else, but the cafe speech was amazing, just what was needed. Please continue to develop Miroku's character in the direction you're headed. "Big Trouble" is a wonderfully written story. I have enjoyed it immensley; please keep up the excellent work! Jin Ryu The Silver Dragon
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a definite talent for humor. Not just thinking up the funny stuff, but writing it in an especially funny way, maximizing the overall total funny. You handle the serious stuff just fine, too, and I really love some of the subtle ways you convey romantic sentiment (such as the "It's not like he had anything better to do for the moment. Or for the rest of his life, for that matter..." bit in chapter 13). The quality of the story is better than "Easy as 1, 2, 3", too. In that I could never quite understand why Inuyasha and Kagome fell in love (beyond the author wanting them too). In this story, though, the feelings between them grow in a much more realistic and believable manner, an improvement I'm glad to see. Or something.
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: June 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like you're story, I just read all of the posted chapters and can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Keep up the great work :)
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Title: i can't believe you only have 2 reviews
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read all 26 chapters and I'm impressed the story was well written and I can relate to the Rin disasters thou I was kinda hoping Kouga would show up as the push InuYasha needed to confess his feeling for Kagome. So when is Sesshomaru going to show up to pick the girl up.
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: June 15, 2005 13:16 CDT
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i cant believe you only have one review!! i love it! i guess some people just dont review a lot...come to think of it, i dont either. I really really really like this story and where it is going, and i LOVE all the old lady characters! I also checked out the fanart and it looks really good! I just finished what you have written on this story, and Im just about to go check out your other stories. I hope they will be as good as this one! I also like how you have rin as a little girl in this fic, so many people have an older rin paired with sesshoumaru, so its refreshing to see one with her still as a little girl. Keep it up, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story so far.....tho i only read the first chapter -__-; keep up the good work.
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