| "A Human Challenge: A Life Well Lived" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't feel like logging in) On: May 25, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good and interesting DBZ fic that touches on characters that seriously need more attention. Everyone seems to focus on either the saiyans or Vegeta and Bulma. It's about time Yamcha and Krillin got their moment in the spotlight. I really hope you contiune with this fic in the future. Until then...
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
yey for Yammmie and Krillen! I love these guys and your piece went far to give them some of their due! Yamcha's line about HFIL cracked me up, and then you hit us with "Mr. Exposition." It's true that DBZ was a Saiyan lovefest and regretably so has much of fanfiction been that too. There aren't enough good Yamcha stories! More Yammie!
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Reviewed By: Kieri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a very enjoyable little piece, giving us reflections of two characters often underappreciated. As I was reading I chuckled at their sensitivies to their faults, at least as the fans see them. I always thought Yamcha was a bit bland, but it does give a writer room to flesh him out. I would be interested in reading more on their side trip before Earth is restored. Just how far can these two get? Nice job.
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