| "The Mixer" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story. continue please!
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since you review my story, I only think it is fair I return the favor. Please don't take this as a flamer. Don't make every one seem so hyper all the time. Is Kagome a miko? Are there other demons? I think it would be intresting if you add Kouga when Inuyasha has developed some sort of feeling for Kagome so he will get jelous. I havent read a story yet about a mixer. So your idea is completly original to me. You should not stop this story, it has a lot of potential. You are doing really good for your first fanfic. Try to lengthen the chapters a bit, even if means taking longer to update. It is a lil OOC, but most story's are. Inuyasha has yet to be rude, and Kagome does not cuss. Your doing great with Miroku though.LOL I am looking forward to reading the rest of your story. Update asap. Hope you find my review useful. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea definatly add Kouga it would make things more intersting for Inuyasha and Kagome! well keep up the good work and updte again soon please? and why do your chappy's have to be so short?
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Reviewed By: kagome101 On: January 18, 2005 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it you should write more plllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!well i got to go bye byes!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
heehee this is gud i need 2 no wat happens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK (not logged in I think) On: November 17, 2004 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likie! I hop eyou update soon.i would like to knwo what happens at the mixer. Udate soon. ^_^ PLease and Thank YOu
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK (not logged in I think) On: November 17, 2004 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likie! I hop eyou update soon.i would like to knwo what happens at the mixer. Udate soon. ^_^ PLease and Thank YOu
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Reviewed By: V.t. chernobyl On: November 15, 2004 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Plz continue, it definitely has potential! now all you have to do is expand on it!
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Reviewed By: chibikins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!!!! plz keep updating it!!!!!! its wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!! your also a great writer!!!!! so write!!!!!! for all yur fans!!!!!!!! ~*Chibikins*~
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Reviewed By: miko_archer On: November 14, 2004 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue!!
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Reviewed By: Ayamegrl876 On: November 09, 2004 07:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool story! Please update soon I really like the way it's going. Don't stop now!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha cracks himself up a lot (No one laughs, Inutasha begins to crack up, and Miroku moves his eyebrows up and down). On: November 02, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Skittlez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I really like this story and I think you should keep it!! please keep it and make new chapters!! I cant believe this is your first fanfic!! your sooo good at it! so plz update soon!I give it 10/10!
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Reviewed By: Inu-demongrl9411 On: October 19, 2004 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good job! I think your doing good for your first fanfic. I think you need to write more though. You just can't stop in the middle of story! Please update soon and be confident in your story! It doesn't suck!
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Reviewed By: Miroku_is_my_hero On: October 17, 2004 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, youngin' please update! I think your doing fine for a beginner!! Keep up the good work!!
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