| "Nossoreg's Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: C.J. ^_^ On: April 10, 2005 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!! that was a great fanfic, I loved it i really hope you write loads more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!! I really ejoyed that story!! you really made the story come to life!!!!! I think you are a great writer I hope you never stop writing for you really now how to tell a story!!!! thank from a new fan!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Temptation/tempest On: November 17, 2004 03:49 CST
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Well that was a wonderfully creative story. I usually pass on the action/adventure, but this one was really entertaining to read and it had the added bonus of sentiment. I thought your portrayal of Vegeta was great, especially when he realized that he had to embrace his darkness in order to think like his enemy. I love the fact that Vegeta was the hero in this one. He had to look to his past to save his future, and realized love is more powerful than greed.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: AUA_FEFE On: November 15, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man every chapter of this story was breathe taking i was so feeling it ... your really good ... and i like how you've made vegeta out to how he truly is !!!! :) and how all the characters seem so real you've used them as if it was a real dragonballz you even got krillen down PERFECT lol !! keep it going man ... im so your fan frm now on !! GO HARD with some new ones ... this one was too good for you to stop now !!!!! ...
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 16:46 CDT
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cool!! I remember the opening from the workshop and you've abbreviated it real nice--this is a fun story with all the gang. I'm glad it's not finished because I want to read more. It moves quickly and easily and I'm sure you'll tie up the plot in primo style! Gohan would be the one to figure out who the villian is--!
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